Welcome to Verselove, a place for educators to nurture their writing lives and to advocate for writing poetry in community. We are gathering every day in April to write– no sign-ups, no fees, no commitments. Come and go as you please. All that we ask is that if you write, you respond to others to mirror to them your readerly experiences — beautiful lines, phrases that resonate, ideas stirred. Enjoy. (Learn more here.)
Our Host: Leilya Pitre

Leilya Pitre lives in Ponchatoula, LA, which is known as the Strawberry Capital of the World. She teaches at Southeastern Louisiana University and coordinates the English Education Program. With her students, who are tomorrow’s English teachers, she tries to think of the ways to make learning accessible, enjoyable, and effective. She loves to learn about people, cultures, and rich traditions all over the world. In her free time, she reads, writes, listens to music, visits her children and grandchildren, or travels with her husband. Leilya’s love for poetry is recharged by this community or #VerseLovers.
Inspiration
Spring is my huge inspiration; it always was. To me, it brings hope. It unfolds in small moments—birds chirping, sun warming us up, tree blossoms, long evening walks with a loved one. It makes me hear more, see more, and do more. It signals a fresh start, an awakening, or a new opportunity. It feels like the world turns toward me.
When you think about spring, what’s one that speaks to you?
Process
Let’s try to think about spring in your life using a tricube form. A tricube consists of three stanzas, each with three lines, and each line having three syllables—quick, rhythmic, and focused. It’s easy to remember as 3:3:3.
Begin by answering the question: What does spring mean to you?
You may jot down your thoughts and then choose your words and lines for the poem, or you may begin crafting a poem right away – whatever works best for you.
Certainly, you don’t have to write about spring or use the suggested form. Just let your pen (or keyboard) take you on a little journey.
Leilya’s Poems
Here is my tricube:
Pause—Look—See
When spring speaks,
Open your heart,
Pause—look—see.
A new leaf,
Soft green stretch,
Breath of light.
A kind friend,
Keen-eyed soul,
Caring heart.
Your Turn
Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may choose to use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming. If you’d like to invite other teachers to write with us, tell them to subscribe. Also, please be sure to respond to at least three writers.
I know I’m a little late with this one, but I really wanted to give my time to practice writing a tricube. The days have been so dreary that it has been difficult to write something cheerful about spring, which is what I wanted to do. I didn’t want to lean into the dreariness. I remember a week or so ago when the weather was feeling more like that happy spring. My son and I were driving home and saw a cute little house with so so so many tulips in the flowerbeds along the perimeter of the house. I put myself in that moment when were enamored with that sight…and it felt good to feel that again on this very rainy and gray day.
Thank you, Leilya for reminding us of a form of poetry. It has been helpful to have poetry structure lately. I think my mind likes the opportunity to play with words in this way.
Spring is Back
A tricube (3:3:3) by Amber Harrison
Rays streak through
clouds scattered above–
a golden blue.
Tulips charm beds
along brick walls–
red, yellow, pink.
Green leaves up,
stems hold blooms–
I breathe again.
Whoops! I didn’t do three syllables. I did three words. Here’s a revision that was fun to make!!!
Spring is Back
A tricube (3:3:3) by Amber Harrison
Rays streak through
clouds scattered –
golden blue.
Tulips charm
red brick walls–
yellows, pinks.
Green leaves up,
stems hold blooms–
breath endures.
I also love spring (but I do love all seasons in their own way) and I really enjoyed this 3:3:3 style! I don’t think I’ve written in this format before. Here is my tricube for spring.
blossoms blown
breath of life
approaching
restlessness
longer days
sunset walks
warmer sun
wicked storms
brighter days
Thank you, Alexis! The alliteration in the first stanza add to a brisk pace of your poem. I want to move with you noticing blooms, longer days, warmer sun, and wicked storms. Beautiful image snippets!
I don’t think I used the tricube either and am fond of it now. I can definitely see it being a go-to form for when I feel I need to write, but I don’t know where to begin or end. This can guide me to condense my language in the best way possible.
The first line of your poem reminds me of all the little blossoms that are scattered across the sidewalks from strong winds. Now that it has rained the blossoms are sticking to my shoes. This line makes me think of all of that. I love how just those three syllables has created so much imagery and memories and connection to your and others in my mind.
I think spring maybe means different things depending on where you live. It’s been pretty dreary up here in Spokane this winter…
Welcome
Sun peeks through
clouds and damp
hope, bright, warm
Bright green growth
soil damp, new
blooms, grass, buds
Windows, doors
open breezy
Spring, Welcome.
Hi, Shelly! Yes, spring is different throughout the country. I am lucky to live in the South. I am glad though that “[s]un peeks through” bringing you hope and warmth. Hopefully, spring signs will become more present in Spokane soon.
Here’s my attempt at a tricube, from the prompt at Reflections on the Teche.
Arms open
We greet Spring
With a smile.
Welcoming
Visitors
One and all
To join us
in color
and in dance.
Diane, I love how you do it on the Teche “Welcoming/ Visitors/ One and all.” It seems like you have some fun there with coloring and dances. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Injust Spring
slate sleet slop
cold raindrops
oh, please stop
peeking SUN?!
Go! Now! Run!
bright! warm- done?
sweater snug
i just shrug
spring’s cold hug
Leilya- what a lovely prompt and mentor poem! Sorry- forgot to post in the poem! This was short and sweet but made me think and puzzle out a little poem math in the most fun way. I love “soft green stretch”- I can see those stems reaching for the sun!
Oh my goodness, this is so fun. All the sounds and rhymes work together so well – definitely a poem to be read aloud! I love the last stanza – and I, too, am “sweater snug” this evening!
Emily, hi! Love your poem from the first line till the last one. Just saying out loud “slate sleet slop” is fun, though the reality of this condition may not be. The rhyming and alliteration with consonance add so much movement and create some urgency. This is brilliantly crafted! Thank you.
Aw, Emily, I think of you up there in the far reaches and wonder how you are doing. I can tell that you are ready for spring. Here’s a warm hug from back home. Love to you and your sweet little boy. I hope the teaching year has gone well and that you are holding up in these trying times. Love, Susie
This is so yummy to say. I love cold raindrops, oh, please stop. I’ve said that enough lately, and again today as the rain slaps against my window. What a fun conversation with the weather.
I am feeling this one so much. I definitely want the cold raindrops to stop and for the sun to be bright. Yet…that sweater weather is a nice relief and hug. I like how you put that last line. What a kind way to see spring treating us even though we want to be defiant against it and welcome more warmth and sunshine.
Spring Season
Flowers bloom
All around
Stop to smell
Rain pours down
Drip Drip Drip
Flowers grow
Sunshine glows
Buzz Buzz Buzz
Flowers grow
Katelyn, thank you for advising us “Stop to smell.” So often we are running somewhere, somehow, and the nature’s beauty is dismissed completely. Love the use of onomatopoeia with “Drip Drip Drip” and “Buzz Buzz Buzz.”
Katelyn, I love the persistence of the flowers; they’ll “grow” rain or shine! Thank you for writing and sharing with us today!
I love this form. In such few words you create a visual of Springtime.
Katelyn! How fun with the sound words. I especially find the repetition of them to be powerful.
What A fun prompt and beautiful example!
Buds captured
in icy traps
sway and snap
Power lines—
dead, sagging
Darkness falls
Four blessed nights
reading books
by flashlight
Oh, Stacy, that is a dedicated reader who feels those electric outages makes one “blessed” to be able to read “by flashlight” Such a precious poem!
Oh, no, Stacey! “Icy traps” again? I am so sorry, but as I mentioned in response to Mo a bit earlier, sometimes I appreciate when weather outbursts slow me down. Of course, staying without electricity for four “blessed nights” isn’t much fun. We once didn’t have electricity for eight days, and it was stinky hot August in Louisiana, so I am able to relate. I hope the heating works somehow. Thank you for writing and sharing under these extreme conditions.
I love how you start this poem, with buds captured in icy traps, sway and snap. This sets the mood so perfectly for this icy weather. Four blessed nights ends this poem on an unexpected surprise that makes me nod my head as I remember that sometimes the unexpected can be a hidden pleasure.
Oh my! Thank you for this format and this prompt, Leilya. We had parent-teacher conferences tonight and I got to playing between parents and… well, you’ll see the results below. Of note: it started snowing right near the end of the evening!
Spring Starts When
Spring starts when
snow melts and
white snow drops
push green through
earth newly
unfrozen.
Then yellow
and purple,
come croci.
***
Spring starts when
robins’ red
breasts appear
in tangled
brown branches
that balloon
and burst forth
into green
ecstasy.
***
Spring starts when
students who
once hid in
jackets are
suddenly
shedding their
layers and
showing a
lot more skin.
***
Spring starts when
forecasters
surprise us
predicting
freezing rain
overnight.
Then all through
the city
children who
yesterday
delighted
in tank tops
are wearing
their jammies
inside out
and hoping
for just one
last snow day.
Amanda,
I love that you ran with the tricube form and made it your own. I needed all the stanzas because I was enjoying the change of seasons mixed with the changes in children. I have been wondering how the middle and high school teachers handle the pajamas to school option that has become so “normal” for that age group.
These lines dazzled me:
Amanda, what a wonderful poetic story you tell here. You make it look easy. I love the repetition of “Spring starts when” I must say, those first two stanzas take my breath away, as do snow drop flowers.
Amanda, it seems like you really had fun with tricubes today. I love all the instances when “spring starts”–snow melts, robins turn red, predictions are scary, but most of all, I like the one about students shedding their layers. I also appreciate it because it can be read not liberally, but your students becoming more comfortable around you and opening up more. Thank you for your wonderful poems!
Amanda,
I think you and I live in the coldest places, which might explain why we both wrote about melting snow. I love the repeated line and all it brings forth in each verse. Do you have students who wear shorts and sandals all winter? I often see coats scattered on the playground of our neighborhood elementary school.
Amanda,
I loved reading this! I chuckled at this line: “and hoping for one last snow day”
Careful what you wish for…schools here have closed for the whole week due to an ice storm!
Southern Ontario? We’re in Ottawa!
Spring Mood
By Mo Daley 4/2/25
The storms that
come crashing
through at night
and remain
all day let
me recharge
even though
their gloom seems
prevalent
“Spring Mood” is a perfect title for your poem. Some days are like this, even in Chicago.
Mo,
Love the tone switch in your poem from relaxing storm to gloomy mood.
Mo, this is quite a valid outlook on spring storms. They slow you down and let you recharge. I like it when the weather forces me to take a break. We know that the sun will come out again, right? Thank you for sharing today.
Mo! I was really feeling this tension today. I wanted to go out and walk my dogs our usual 3 miles, but the weather was just not having it. I wanted the exercise but then realized that it was a perfect day for rest, so I stayed in and read with my 6-year-old instead. Thanks for writing this – that it might bring forth that memory and reemphasize the importance and necessity of rest.
Hi, Mo – your tricube fits the skies I had here in STL this afternoon/evening. It crashed through and now a crescents moon is hanging in the western sky.
We don’t often see the good in storms. But your line about recharging makes me realize that we need to take a step back, rather than react to every situation.
Love this idea! I’ve never written a tricube before, but here it goes!
Spring
Spring is slush.
Wet and brown.
Still need boots.
Spring is soft.
With new life,
everywhere.
Bunnies hide
so as not
to be seen.
This is a lovely snipet of spring, Elisa. I really like the line, “Spring is soft.”
Elisa, that first stanza really brings back so many memories of that wet spring weather. Not snow and not yet green. I, like Mo, really appreciated, “Spring is soft.”
Elisa,
Theres a happy, viral sensibility to your poem, which I love, especially the bunnies with the musical inflection in the word’s phonemes.
You have written a beautiful tricube. As Mo noticed already, I, too, love “Spring is soft” stanza. Image of hiding bunnies is also enticing. Thank you, Eliza!
Elisa!! I like the lines Spring is slush and Spring is soft. Happy to see you!
Thanks again, Leilya, I loved this prompt. I had a busy day and thought about spring on this cold day in the desert.
Where have you
been, little
mama quail?
All winter–
stillness. Now
I recall
your faithful
nesting, your
darts and zips
Gorgeous focus here, Denise. I love the voice and action. Stunning!
Love this, Denise! I like how you incorporate the 3 syllables in a sentence across different lines.
Oh, Denise, what a sweet poem! You have that mama quail you missed all winter, and we have a finch nesting in our grape wine. Last spring they chased me away many times with their “darts and zips.” Love the sound of this final line, it is so visual. Hope you get some warm spring days soon too. Thank you for writing with me, friend!
You make me want to catch a glimpse of her, Denise! I hope you get to see her soon.
Denise,
This is sweet. I love that you’re addressing the quail and recalling a memory. I want to know when you find the quail.
Denise—this exudes spring!
Ooh! Denise, I love this! I like the focus on the quail, the question, the remembered stillness. (This is definitely a cold CA week!)
Thanks Leilya–I love a short poem, although it’s sometimes hard to leave out words and syllables!
Spring is supposed to be all flowers blooming and warm temps…right? Somehow the Southern CA version of spring did not get the memo. Right now spring break is gale force winds, blowing sand, and zipping that puffer right up to the chin. (You can find the version with photos on my blog: https://thinkingthroughmylens.com/2025/04/02/is-it-spring-yet-npm25-day-2/
It’s Not Yet
In mild temps
it’s nuance
announcing
Hummingbirds
sip nectar
bold buds bloom
Wind whips sand
soars clouds cling
summer waits
Kim Douillard
4-2-25
Kim, thank you for directing me to your blog. I love seeing images described in your poem. In your poem the sounds devices are used so “deliciously”–whether it is a consonance with “m”s and “n”s in the first stanza or alliteration in the third stanza. Just saying “wind whips,” “sand soars,” and “clouds cling” makes me “see” the nature’s capricious temper, no wonder that “summer waits.” Beautifully done!
Wow, KIm. You’ve really managed to do a lot in just 27 syllables. Your word choice is spot on. This poem begs to be read aloud.
Kim,
Your alliteration is wonderful. It’s such a marvelous sound device. I’m reading your poem metaphorically as it makes me think of characters in the wings awaiting their entrances, as summer is doing in your poem.
Leilya,
I am embracing “pause—look—see” this spring and trying to be more intentional about life, so I appreciate this reminder and will journey w/ it at home and as I travel later this month. Thank you for hosting and for your words. As you’ll see, I notice something else about spring in the frozen PNW mountains. I made a canva w/ a photo from my yard.
spring caca [tricube]
spring sunshine
thaws our yard
bursting buds
blooming brown
poop-laced mines
cover yards
exploding
sticky shit
clings to shoes
Glenda Funk
4-2-25
Oh no! Glenda that is hilarious! I also wrote a bit of a complaining poem. It’s the wind…no fun! Love the photo too!
Oh, Glenda! What a hilarious spring poem, but yes, I remember those little mines waiting to be discovered. The photo made me laugh twice! Your word choice is rich–so much said, so few words.
Too funny! I love your Canva and appreciate the unlovely things that appear after winter’s thaw. Sticky shit is my favorite line!
Hahahaha! That’s funny. I like how you use three different words to describe feces. Ah! That gives me lots of ideas. LOL!
Glenda, I am speechless. No, I have things to say about your photo and thing you notice as your yard thaws. It would be funny or somehow acceptable if the poop piles were made by stray dogs. Some people shouldn’t have pets; I’ll stop at that, not mentioning the shoes. On another note, the “caca” seems to be universal for that “thing” in many languages.
Actually, Leilya, there’s nothing funny about people allowing their dogs to defecate in others’ yards. We don’t even let our dog do his business in our front yard. Every time we take our dog to run we see crap in the LDS church yard and on the elementary school playground. Kids step in the doo-doo and track it into their carpeted classrooms.
I did not expect to encounter such a relatable poem today, Glenda. THose landmines are everywhere!
I really didn’t know what to expect. I honestly wouldn’t have been surprised if the “spring caca” had to do with the ORANGE CACA in government!
You are a hoot!
Glenda!! YES! You’ve been in my yard! This is great!
Oh Glenda! This made me laugh! Sadly, yes, this is what the melting snow often reveals.
LOL, Glenda… I mumbled this afternoon that I had to do poop patrol… I feel your poem was watching me. Hugs, Susie
For me, Spring brings the return of color to my world. Our winters are winter whites, grays and browns. The flowers, sunshine, blue sky, and birds bring the color of life back whisking away the dreary gloom of a the winter months.
Peeks of green
Stretch to grow
New life shows
Bud of gold
Spring star blooms
Suns fill yard
Bright or mute
Hues wash world
Gray gloom gone
The alliteration at the end of your poem creates such a strong juxtaposition between the earlier spring colors and dreary winter!
Cathy,
The beauty of the colors in your poem brings light to my eyes. Lovely. And “Gray gloom gone” sounds magical.
Yes to bringing colors of life back! The imagery and signs of spring are quite vivid in your poem. Love the use of alliteration. Any sound devices add to pacing and poem’s dynamic. Thank you for writing and sharing!
I’m usually pretty wordy, so this was a challenge. And to an extent I failed because when I got to the end, I just wanted more syllables. But needing more syllables kind of fit the theme of wanting another trip. Or another spring break, which is what I love most about spring. So in the end I left the extra syllables. I also don’t normally rhyme, but I hit upon a rhyme in the second stanza by accident and then revised the first to fit. (I also haven’t been on this trip yet–3 days away–but I know that it will be awesome, so I wrote it as if I had already gone.)
April starts
Break alights
Hop a flight.
Eiffel waits
And Big Ben.
Can’t sleep in.
What a trip!
Savor fun.
Now I want another one.
Cheri,
You are going to have so much fun. I love London and Paris and love to travel. Be careful when you visit the Eiffel Tower. There are some sketchy people around. Your tricube has the galloping pace of a big city trip. Have fun!
What a trip indeed. Seeing places we’ve only read about is so enlightening. Thanks for reminders. Took teens during Spring break one year after visiting these places with my daughter. Glad you enjoyed your trip!
Cheri, so, so clever. You are right. The extra syllables at the end are perfect for your theme. The rhythm and rhyme here are just a delight too! Hooray! I’m so glad you still get to look forward to your trip. Enjoy!
Cheri, I appreciate you sharing your process with us. It always helps knowing how others approach writing a poem. The context made me appreciate your rhymes even more. I am excited for your upcoming trip. Actually, my husband and I are taking a trip to Paris and Barcelona later in May, so I can absolutely relate. You are going to love it, and please, savor all the fun. You deserve it!
Thank you, Leilya, for your wonderful prompt and poem. I love the opening stanza. Yes, let’s open our hearts.
April Charms
spring’s mud lush-
us—naked
pink ladies,
tap dance spells
sprouting buds
perky wet
our bared charms
mesmerize
April fools
Barb Edler
2 April 2025
Barb,
Love the nod to e e cummings. The dashes are an effective way of reminding us there are some muddy messes in springtime. I want to see those lovely pink ladies and watch all fools get a certain kind of mesmerizing. Brilliant poem!
“Mud lush-us” is amazing. I can picture those dancing flowers. So precious!
I’m over here chuckling – – because I can’t decide whether you are mesmerizing April fools or whether you are mesmerizing, and it’s April Fools. It works perfectly either way and the mystery is an added very clever poetic surprise.
Barb, I was just talking to my students about dashes in poetry a few days ago. I like them too. They help me say more with less, i.e., they hide some words. I can imagine those “April fools” mesmerized by your “bared charms.” Your poem made me smile. Thank you, friend!
Barb- I love this and how it lands on April Fools. And the “lush-/us—naked” wordplay. So good! Hugs, Susie
I love the return of spring and always notice the sounds and new green poking through the mulch. This year I have been walking around the yard looking for it because I am craving the warmer weather. My tricube reflects the short amounts of time I have had to get outside to find these signs of spring.
Early morn’s
herald is
the bird’s song
Midday’s walk
hunting for
daffodils
Peeping floats
the night air’s
lullabye
Heather, your poem is full of song, light and sound. I appreciate the peaceful, gentle close. Gorgeous!
I love the line “Peeping floats” as I think it truly captures the whimsy that is daffodils! I have a BUNCH in my yard right now and they make me very happy.
This short poems captures the progression of Spring’s return throughout a full day. It shows how Spring awakens us but also lulls us to sleep at night.
Heather,
I read so many blog posts about birds last month that I’ve been looking up and out for them. I saw a robin hopping on the sidewalk yesterday. I can hear that lullaby at night. It’s a lovely spring serenade.
Thank you for taking me on a day trip, Heather! From morning “bird songs” to midday “hunting for daffodils” to “night air’s lullaby,” your poem entices me with charming images and sounds.
Heather,
This is like a spring scavenger hunt. I love your use of time & the beauty we find throughout a spring day!
Leilya,
This is a wonderful prompt. I love the phrase “breath of light’. This form allows for such concision and flashes of imagery. I really enjoyed writing today and reading all of the contributions.
Look for Smoke from the Backyard
Stoking coals
for the first
barbecue
Banking fires
for good friends
to drop in
Sharing laughter,
warm burgers
and cold beer.
Your poem is so inviting and speaks of the community that emerges with spring.
I really love your title, Dave, and the inviting images of your tricube. The last stanza is my favorite.
Dave,
I love how warm weather brings people together. Your last stanza sounds so inviting! Cheers to Spring!
Sounds like a lovely time. I like this image of spring.
Dave,
Where’s my invite? I could use a burger and beer. What speaks to me most in your poem is the sense of being set free into the night after being cooped up all winter.
Thank you, Dave! Today is a feast of poetry for me. I enjoy every poem, every word, Every rhyme, and every image. In your poem, there is warmth and food, what else do we want? That first BBQ smoke is really special; add friends to it, and you get a heartwarming gathering.
Dave,
My hand is up, waiting for the invitation! This is how life is meant to be lived. I love the flow and vibe of fun and togetherness you bring to us.
Dave, I love the crafting of this! There’s such a flow throughout. That first stanza’s k’s, f’s, and b’s are so perfectly placed! And the f’s and d’s in stanza two and the g’s and b’s in stanza three are so so good, too!
Dave— Dang, wish you lived next door! I can see the smoke, snell the BBQ. MMM- yummy poem. Susie
Leilya,
Thank you for your prompt. The hopefulness that Spring brings is definitely needed right now. “Pause-look-see” is a great reminder for us to slow down and appreciate the wonder of nature.
Nature’s Beauty
Morning chill
Warms with sun
Scarlet skies
Untucked buds
Dewy lawns
Touch of wind
Buzzing bees
Robin’s egg
Speckled blue
Tammi,
thank you for so many beautiful images.
I especially like:
Lovely!
I love the use of color in this poem — beginning with “scarlet skies” and the ending with the “speckled blue” of the robin’s egg. Gorgeous attention to those details.
What a delightful array of touch, sight, and sound. Loved “Scarlet skies/Untucked buds”. A rich tapestry of the beautiful things of spring. Stunning poem!
Tammi,
Outstanding color imagery in your poem: scarlet, blue. I hear the buzzing bees too. I’ve become addicted to the NYT spelling bee, so bees are on my mind!
I like the way your tricube sounds like a list of springtime delights. Beautiful images, all.
Tammi, love the sound of “buzzing bees.” Your spring sketch is vivid and joyful. Thank you for writing today!
Spring
comes early
in Texas
April teases
sunlight with
raindrops streak
kale remains
while parsley
bushes out
are the weeds
taller
than
the
trees?
Jamie,
your last stanza made me laugh. I like how you played with the form to make it mirror its meaning.
I also like the contrast between
Really fun end to this poem, Jamie. I think our lawn right now looks like a weed fest ready to take over. Loved “sunlight with/ raindrops streak”
Jamie,
We’re still frozen up north, so imagining kale and parsley bushels appeals to me. Let it grow!
Jamie, I loved getting a little taste of springtime in Texas. I smiled at the last question. Perfect.
Jamie, these lines are my inspiration: “April teases / sunlight with /raindrops streak.” Beautiful, creative, vivid! As a side note, my parsley is, too, growing tall this spring; and looks like a bush in the midst of a herb garden.
Jaime — I love how this turns to the weeds! Perfect. Susie
Leilya, I absolutely love the line “Pause-Look-See” – a mantra to live by in all seasons, I think.
Tricubes are fun! Here’s mine (shout out to Mary Oliver):
from slumber
waking sun
whispering
namaste
tiny buds
leaning in
to promise
blossoms shout
live your one
precious life
Maureen,
Great advice from you and Mary Oliver:
Love how you structured your poem so we move through it the way we move through spring, taking us from
to
Lovely!
I let out a huge sigh at the end. What an important message to all of us – “live your one precious life.” Thank you for this beautiful poem that I will think of when I wake up.
Maureen, I love the title and process of this poem. Your closing stanza is such an important reminder that life is precious, and I can feel those tiny buds leaning in. Fantastic tricube.
The sun extending namaste made me envision the sun bowing to me to acknowledge my light. Those words were powerful for me.
Maureen,
I love the nod to Mary Oliver and the way all of nature honors her in your poem.
Maureen, you made this look easy, but I know it’s not. It’s hard to find the perfect word with the right amount of syllables too. You did that here. I love the sounds and images in your poem, and it reads beautifully.
Maureen, I read your poem several times and couldn’t choose a favorite line. I just want to quote your poem in its entirety. The blossoms’ shout may win with their great advise to live “one precious life” to the fullest. Love Mary Oliver and appreciate a nod to her. Thank you!
Maureen,
I’m taking your advice. Really trying to live more for reasons besides work. I don’t want to look back and wish I had done things differently.
Oh, yes. Love your first stanza. And Mary…
Maureen— Mary O is listening… she would love this.
Susie
“Wait for blooms,”
Spring thunders.
“I’m coming!”
“It’s still cold,”
I complain.
“I want sun.”
Spring replies,
promises
rainbows soon.
Your conversation with spring reminds of the similar one on my end too. I appreciate you personifying spring. Promise of rainbows sounds attractive, as they usually appear after the rain. Thank you for writing and sharing with us today!
Love the way you personify spring and its its promises. Spring is slow showing itself here in Cleveland, Ohio too.
‘Spring thunders’ – so true! The weather is squirrelly. I love the “Spring replies/promises,” I hear a plaintive cry in the pairing of those two lines. Here’s to rainbows soon!
I like the approach of a conversation with spring, and the play on words with “Spring thunders,” especially as that’s what the midwest is waiting on tonight. I join your chorus of wanting more sun.
I really enjoy the conversation between you and Spring here — especially how it “thunders” which is what Spring is currently doing for me. I also adore the rainbow at the end — because of course the promise of spring is full of color!
Boy do I feel the “I’m still cold” in this poem. I echo those complaints! Love it.
Ona, hooray for spring always winning. I’m loving all those quotes, and Spring has the last word. Beautiful.
toes warming
still clenched tight
not yet ready
but soon will
anticipate
and excite
new buds sprout
air softens
you belong here
Hi, Luke! Yes, even in Louisiana, I still have “toes warning,” especially early in the morning. I like the final sentiment with “air softens / you belong here.” Thank you for sharing your poem with us today!
“Toes warming/still clenched tight” – you capture the uncertainty of the temperatures in these early days.
Luke,
Spring tip toeing in is a pperfect depiction. I agree Spring does belong here.
I love the image comparing warming toes and those “clenched tight” not quite ready. The image develops buds to toes, as if they are sprouting and softening. What a love close – “you belong here.” And don’t we all?
Spring
Outside, cold and crisp
yet the sun’s rays warm
the earth
A crack in the soil
and then a green sprout
from the earth
What is it?
See? A small bud
and a burst of color
Happening everywhere!
Reliving flowers
planted a year ago
In a time
before the earth
got so hard and cold.
Susan your poem celebrates nature’s resilience and resistance, which are so well articulated in these lines:
“Reliving flowers
planted a year ago
In a time
before the earth
got so hard and cold”
Bravo! Thank you for your words today.
“A crack in the soil/and then a green sprout” – love the juxtaposition here, the surprise.
Your last stanza– Wow! What a powerful reflection of our world today.
I particularly like the phrase “reliving flowers” – what a fun use of the verb! – and the last stanza echoes the idea of reliving something – in fact, it almost feels like it could be the start of a new poem itself.
My birthday
A bird song
I will sing
My first born
Dew on grass
Belly laughs
My whole life
Rain drops fall
Flowers bloom
I love
“Dew on grass
Belly laughs”
so much. I keep repeating it to myself.
Ashley — I love the joyful tone. Since it’s dark grey, pouring rain, just came up from basement after sirens blaring, I’m happy to read there’s another happy world out there. Thank you, Susie
Happy Birthday, Ashley! You have a lot to celebrate in April: yourself, your first born, life, blooms, spring. I appreciate each word in your poem. Thank you!
This is so joyful:
Such different noticings, and all three so sweet.
A lovely reflection for a spring birthday! Each stanza really does its own work here – three perfect images, like rain drops or dew drops. I also appreciate the juxtaposition in the third stanza – or perhaps it’s cause/ effect? Either way, rain drops fall/ flowers bloom & that is life, isn’t it?
Spring
Daffodils
Bow their heads
To the dawn
Reverence
For all God’s
Creations
The sun smiles
On creatures
Great and small
Lovely! You create a world with only 9 syllables.
Beautiful and reverent. I love the 3rd stanza!
The imagery of daffodils bowing their heads is lovely.
Melissa, love the beautiful imagery in each stanza, a metaphora of daffodils=reference, and personification. You are hitting all poetic literary devices here so skillfully. “The sun smiles /on creatures/ great and small” warms my heart. Thank you!
I love the personification, and I can feel the reverence.
Melissa, this is gorgeous. It is a prayer of praise. The bowing of the daffodils heads, the reverence of/for creation, the shout out to the Alexander hymn. So much to love here.
As you will see from my poem, I’ve been yearning for all the spring ephemerals that are just starting to sprout right now. Conveniently, their names are mostly three syllables:
Signs of Spring
Flowers peep
All in threes
Spring is here!
Crocuses
Hyacinths
Spring Beauty
Daffodils
Trout Lilies
Spring at last.
Note: Spring Beauty is the name of a pretty little spring ephemeral– look it up. You’ll notice them everywhere once you know what they are.
Beautiful. This poem makes me happy! I love spring flowers. They bring so much hope.
The personification adds such a beautifully whimsical tone to your poem! It made me picture happy flowers smiling up from a garden.
Your list of flowers collected in three line groups. What a lovely way to incorporate a tricube highlighting flowers. Your words create a still life.
Jamie
So many beautiful flowers! Yes, this is the delight of spring for me, as well.
Hi, Sheila, I looked up Spring Beauties and now will be looking out for them. I like all the signs of spring in your poem. In my flower beds is a season of amaryllises. They are gorgeous too. Thank you for writing and sharing!
Is that what a group of amaryllises are called? A season? I love that!
Leila! Your poem is lovely and has given me a phrase, a thought, a moment that will stay with me for a long time because I’ve never thought of it before: breath of light. What a beautiful way to think of light…and also of breath…I love it! It is like a blessing… I don’t know if I can explain how much those words caught me… As for me, my first mingle with spring is the wooly bear caterpillar… I kinda stayed in the margins, but…
Ode to Isabella (Tiger Moth)
Wooly bear
slumping by
in heavy
prickly coat,
life is hard,
your shuffle
slow, but you’ve
a secret,
this I know!
Eat! Eat! Eat!
Spin!Spin! Spin!
Wait two weeks—
Spread your wings!
Wooly bear
slumping by,
on pavement
and in fields,
I almost
hear you say
Have courage!
Persevere!
Shed your fears
and fly!
Oh, that last stanza . . . I love the lines “Shed your fears/ and fly!” Love the metaphor.
Yay! for wooly bear! I need a scoop of that last stanza myself: courage and perseverance.
Ann— this is wonderful! I could see this illustrated in a children’s book!
I’m ready to read this in a book. How about you? Love this stanza: prickly coat / life is hard / your shuffle
Lovely imagery!
Ann,
Wooley bear was my nickname as a kid so I couldn’t pass by!
I love the elevation of the caterpillar for our consideration.
“Slow, but you’ve got a secret, this I know!” is a fun and compelling stanza! Spin! Spin!
Ann, I enjoyed your Ode to Isabella so much. I want to know more about this Tiger Moth. So much imagery. Love the encouragement in “Spread your wings!” And “Shed your fears.” I am reading these lines in their literal and metaphorical meanings. Thank you for your craft and wisdom today!
This builds so magnificently to those last lines . . .
I have to laugh because I didn’t catch the title and started reading it, visualizing a real bear. Which almost works, until after he eats. LOL. A lovely visual story of Spring.
Thank you for this lovely prompt!
Perennial Spring
Suns review
Lights rebuke
Heats renew
Perennial
Flower
Sun light heat
Start again, again
One more time
One last time.
Don’t you love seeing the perennials return? Your poem sings with that hope.
Brittany, I am longing for the sun “one more time.” It spent a bit of time with us yesterday and today is all rain and clouds and storms, gray, gray, gray. I love the little bit of science you’ve given us (sun light heat) but mostly I love how the sun is going to start it all again.
Brittany, you begin with the sun – light and heat. Perennial – flower then back to sun light heat. Your final stanza the repetition of again introduces idea of one more time, one last time. Your word repetition seems part of the process of Spring’s change.
Daffodils—
Pushing through
Into Bloom—
You are the
Big sisters,
Singing spring.
Tulips, then
Irises,
Follow you.
We’re on the same wavelength– my poem today is also about flowers. I love the idea of daffodils being the big sisters to all the other bulbs sprouting.
You are the/ big sisters/singing spring…I love imagining those first brave flowers guarding those that follow… spring’s parade brings us beauty and hope. A lovely poem!
Julie — I like the procession of flowers…it feels like home to me…and the verb “push” fits so well. Daffies definitely push. Feels like Spring! Susie
I love this poem about the various flowers of spring — my favorite part for sure! I love how this poem turns into a timeline.
My whole life I have *never* thought of daffodils as the big sisters of spring, but I suspect I will think of this for many springs to come. What a wonderful image.
Testing Season
policies
try to shape
me to score
to measure
minds, restrict
bodies; type
all of the
above: so de-
humanizing
Ouch! But very apt– I love how you break up the syllables in the lines to show a refusal to fit into the box.
Ugh! Testing. I hate this season. All of the above!
Well Sarah…all this rings true and puts me in a Millay state of mind ..it certainly is a “not only underground are the brains of men eaten by maggots” moment in time…but here’s to those babbling flowers that insist we hold onto hope!
Oof. The worst season. Disruptive and such a drain of valuable time. And you’re right—dehumanizing; reducing children to numbers.
Oh gosh, Sarah — I feel your pain. I HATED testing season and how utterly “de-humanizing” it was and still is. Lining up our kids like they were numbers that never measure up to the negative vibes they bilge. Hang in there! Hugs, Susie
It is the season and what I don’t like about spring. I am most drawn to the forcing to “measure minds.” I feel it even more this year with a new scripted curriculum.
Ooof, Sarah. I feel the frustration with the way education is dictated by policies. Your ending stanza says it all.
Preach! It’s maddening! Measure, measure, measure while creatives feel de-valued, and then we wonder why our world is how it is.
Ugh! And I was thinking it was the wind that was bad. Clearly the underside of spring.
Sarah,
Preach. The tests are dehumanizing, but even more dehumanizing is the reductive pedagogical approach to those tests. I wish every teacher realized test prep is antithetical to learning.
Yes! Yes! Yes! No more over-assessing and abusing students’ rights to learn in peace!
Dear All, thank you for such an active participation today. I am responding in chunks, in between my sessions at Meauxmentum Scholar Symposium in Lafayette today. I will get to each poem and comment on each poetic expression of yours by the end of today. For now, I had a moment to write my tricube for today:
April Treats
Seeing words,
Thoughts, ideas
In this space
Noticing
Images,
Witty puns–
In April
I witness
Your Greatness.
Leila, what a fun poem to celebrate the work being done here, this month.
Leilya, I appreciate this poem as a celebration of this group! You are helping me bloom!
Leilya, you are so kind. I haven’t written today, and yet I know you are talking to me too. I look forward to reading others and writing myself sometime today.
I thought of you when I read this in your poem above:
Your caring heart spills over into all you do.
Fun to see you thanking us while you play your own tricube game. Love it!
Leilya, I love that you are writing another tricube. They’re quite addictive – I wrote one for each remaining month of the year this morning (still working on a couple, but they are so much fun)! Thanks for hosting and for inspiring us with such a creative form.
Thank you, Kim! I am “walking my talk” – always write alongside my students. You are way ahead of me with a tricube for each month.
Leilya — Especially in April I love that I come back here and see your “words,/Thought, ideas/In this space” and I’m delighted how it has pulled us together as a poet family. Susie
Spring
forget cold
warm your face
smell lillies
hatred gone
sun beam proud
soaking; dreaming
clean air around
even keel mind
spring delight
Oh, Lauryl, I love the lillies here. An imaged popped right up with that flower choice, and the two lls in “smell” with the two lls in “lillies” created a visual symmetry for me.
Sarah
Lauryl, I loved the optimism in your poem!
Lauryl, so beautiful. I love that this isn’t just about spring, but it’s a metaphor for life.
I’ve long lurked, but thought I’d dip my toes into the water today.
Spring Is
squishy ground
mud puddles
and dog prints
squawking in
wet sneakers
that can’t sneak
traditions:
searching out
crocus blooms
It’s more than a dip – it’s a graceful dive! Welcome, Lainie! Your poem brims with springtime adventures. The “squawking in wet sneakers that can’t sneak” is a perfect descriptive detail – both funny and true. So glad you’re here:)
I love the “squawking in wet sneakers that can’t sneak,” too!
This was the line I really enjoyed as well.
Lainie, This poem made me smile with the line “wet sneakers/that can’t sneak.” Lovely.
Lainie, I’m so glad you jumped in. And as Fran said, with a graceful dive.
“Wet sneakers / that can’t sneak” and the traditions of the last stanza. Such specific and wonderful aspects of spring. Lovely poem!
Welcome Lainie! I love how you lead us through the slosh to crocus blooms! Amazing alliterative word choices: squishy, squawking, searching.
I absolutely LOVE the squishy ground of spring! It makes me so happy. I also enjoy the contrast you have with the squish in stanza one with the squeak in stanza two.
Lainie,
Im so thrilled you are here and shared this delightful poem. I love the dog reference! To avoid the mud I’ve been wearing sloggers, but my dog won’t stop w/ the prints. Love the nod to spring traditions, too.
I love all the images that spring conjures up in your poem! Thanks for sharing it!
Leilya I love the simplicity of this form and I enjoyed your poem. I wrote a poem inspired by the pollen I am still seeing everywhere:
It’s Pollen Time I See by Erica J
Citrine coats
cars, trucks, and
forest floors
puffing up
yellow dust.
I must sneeze–
Gusting winds,
pollen rains
but not washed.
Erica, I enjoy how your poem plays with the clean and dirty conundrum which is spring! I love the color choice: citrine coat sounds nice until you tell us how pervasive and annoying it is! Thanks for this lovely imagery – achoo!!
Whoa, Erica, the “ci” visually in the first three words felt almost like the pollen spreading. And, oh, that yellow dust creates the perfect spring image.
Sarah
Oh, Erica, I’m sorry for your allergies. I know a lot of people who suffer so, and that last stanza is such a great description. “pollen rains / but not washed” Frightful! I hope you get relief soon.
Leilya–Short and sweet! Perfect for today! Your poem is soft and lovely–I love the sentiment in the third stanza. I move from school to school in my liaison position, so getting dressed in Central Maryland is a challenge. I am either too hot or too cold!
Spring’s Conundrum
What to wear?
Morning’s cold
Later’s warmth.
Might be dry
Could be wet
Can’t tell yet.
Weather wavers.
Getting dressed
Gives me stress
GJSands
4-2-25
Gayle, I laughed in recognition of this relatable moment! I like how your short lines mimic the back and forth decision-making process! I also like how those last two stanzas rhyme. Stay warm (but not too warm!)
Lots of whimsy here, Gayle with the quit lines and quick wit that is your gift!
Gayle, were you somehow standing next to me as I was deciding to wear this morning? I think you were. I love the final stanza– the alliteration of “Weather wavers” followed by the internal rhymes of “dressed” and “stress” made me smile.
Well Gayle, I certainly identified with your springtime conundrum ~ though I confess, I don’t need the weather to give me stress getting dressed!
Early spring is two-faced. You expressed that so well here.
So relatable! With a touch of humor in the “distress”!
Gayle,
I feel this poem. Schools here start out warm and get very cold after noon. I love the cadence of your poem and the rhyme.
Hello Leilya. We’re having thunderstorms and tornado touch downs here in West Michigan. So, it was tough to write a sunny poem. But, we do know the rain is needed and the rainbow WILL appear … somewhere … sometime. Here’s my attempt at the tricube.
Joy in Rain?
Yuck! More rain!
What’s to gain
Mud in lane
Thunder rolls
Sad arms fold
Mommy scolds!
Flowers come
Beets? Yum yum
Licking thumb
Anna, I am always in awe of how seamlessly you fold in rhyme to a form as spare as 3 syllables while making your message clear! I enjoy how the third stanza puts a positive spin on the miserable rain from Mama Nature with the hopeful nature of sweet beets and beautiful flowers to come. Nailed it.
I love it all, even though the weather is not playing nicely. It’s so much fun! The second stanza is too cute.
Anna,
I can just see and hear this scene playing out:
Love your playful rhymes.
And now I want beets! Luckily, I can taste then through your poem!
p.s. Hope you and your people are warm and safe amidst the storms, Anna.
Sharon, thanks for comment on poems AND good wishes for the family. Though tornadoes have touched down, we currently are safe. Prayers for us all are appreciated.
Spring 2025, Turkiye
Cemres come:
air, land, sea
warm for spring.
Eid, Pesach,
Twin Easters,
and Ridvan.
Celebrate!
Together
work for peace.
Greetings to you all from the ancient land of Türkiye.
Wishing a joyous spring to everyone, Muslim, Jew, Orthodox and Western Christian, Bahai, however you celebrate.
Amen – let’s hope spring brings peace, and yes, it will be work. I love that I learned about cemres through this poem – didn’t know about the fireballs that warm our air, land, and sea! So cool. I was also thinking of all the holidays and the celebrations that come with warmth. Thanks for this today!
Martha, I adore this recognition and celebration of spiritual JOY!
Martha, what a lovely topic for your spring poem. Yes, all these people, traditions, religions speaking in tricubes today of celebration, togetherness, and working for peace. The last stanza is perfect.
Martha,
this is a much needed call to celebrate all of our humanity and to be renewed. Thanks for this poem!
Spring to Me
The poison
hemlock sprout
must come out
Hours of crouch
pulling pain
roots upturned
But oh, the
fiddlehead
fern in coil
Kate, I can vividly picture you in the “hours of crouch,” wrestling those dogged roots. I also can’t help but think this is a metaphor for so much else: digging up what’s not needed, marveling at the beauty waiting to unfurl. Gorgeous.
Kate, I love that you highlighted some not so fun aspects and pleasant aspects of Spring!
Kate, “But oh…” Wow. This is one of my favorite poems to read today. It reminds me of Mary Oliver. The poison hemlock “But oh…” that “fern in coil” Just beautiful!
Kate! I love the rhythm of that first stanza! It feels like a mantra I would chant while doing that work. Your poem tells a similar story to mine, the undesirable aspects of Spring and how they are inextricably connected to the joyous ones. I think it’s a reminder we all need right around this time.
Hi, Leilya! I absolutely adore your prompt and your poem. I am drawn in from the start because spring speaks so eloquently to my tired soul. I chose one word lines and kept to one letter for each stanza. Makes it a little more child-like so I can attempt it with students.
silently
springtime’s
sunrising
beckoning
beautiful
butterflies
delicate
daffodils
develop
© Stacey L. Joy, 4/2/25
I’m off work today to help a friend so I had time to create an image too. I sure do appreciate a hump day off from work.
Stacey, I love the simplicity and alliteration you use in your poem. And thank you for sharing the image.
Absolutely adore the alliteration and attractive artwork!
STACEY — So beautiful and upbeat. I love the image and the poem. I could use this vibe! Thank you, Susie
Stacey, I know how much you love warm, sunny days, so I hear your “tired soul.” Love alliteration that adds a little challenge to the poem, but elevates the sound, flow, and cadence of the poem. Each following word builds on the previous one. You are so skillful! Love the daffodils in the background.
I love how you used three syllable words for each stanza, Stacey. The alliteration adds a wonderful cadence to your poem, and the Canva rendition is simply gorgeous! Fantastic tricube!
Yay, I hope you enjoyed your Wednesday off. I like your idea of tweaking the prompt to make it more fun/accessible to your fifth graders. I’m sure they’ll have a lot of fun with that! I like “sunrising”
Stacey, I love the sound of this! It sounds so good out loud! (And your image is perfect, too! I hope you enjoyed your day off, as well!)
L.eilya,
I LOVE the accessibility of this prompt! Spring is a great thing to write about and the tricube adds the proper challenge.
Lamenting Joy
dull brown grass
becomes green
flowers bloom
stuffy head
snotty sneeze
allergies
tug between
beauty and
misery
~Susan Ahlbrand
2 April 2025
Susan, you capture the essence of spring from the colors to the sneezes! Beautiful.
Yes, it is a time between beauty and misery.
I think of the time to come of so much heat.
Oh, Susie, as someone who doesn’t have allergens directly in nature ( my pain is processed dairy products), I can’t imagine this kind of misery. I am so sorry that spring can be a blessing and a curse as you eloquently annunciate in your final stanza. Thank you!
Susan, the paradoxes of spring ring in your poem. We can feel the tug you identify in the closing stanza.
You have great rhyme, truth in the beauty and misery, and it is all so relatable right now! Amen to the tug.
I love how you brought the two different sides of spring together in two different ways and tied it in the end “tug between beauty and misery“
Leilya,
Thank you for your prompt. I love your line, “soft green stretch”. That is such a great image. Thank you for helping me to think of spring today.
Birds out Mother’s Window
Eagle out
Mothers window
Soon to fly
Signals bye
To winter
Hello Spring
Cormorants
Build nests now
Soon to be
Baby Birds.
Spring Brings
Itchy eyes
Acacia tree
Pollen puffs
Sneeze and cry
All season
Allergy
Medicine
I beg you
Summer, come.
As a midwesterner and longtime sufferer of hay fever, I feel SEEN by your second poem! I can set my calendar by the allergies that come and go. “I beg you / Summer, come.” And soon!
As for the first poem, oh! do I wish I had the view out your window…
I love the birds right now. We have a pair of red-tail hawks nesting in a palm tree. So fun to watch. Truly Spring!
Emily, you are an overachiever! Two beautiful poems that tell two quite different stories. Your first poem about birds out of mother’s window reminded me of the time when my firstborn left home “to fly” on her own. It was painful, but so needed to her and me. Your second poem reminded of Bryan Crandall’s poem I read earlier today. Ot is also about allergies, but has humorist approach.
This was so fun, I think I’ll write more throughout my day!
April 2nd
Jackets and
crocs at the
park today
pudgy legs
climb up high
and slide down
Whoops! Puddle
at the end:
wet tushy.
Rachel, That made me laugh! I’m going to guess that you actually saw that happen. It does represent the beginning of spring so well. It dumped rain yesterday at my house. I woke up this morning wishing for my teenagers to be young again and your poem reminded me of those days in the park. A great choice of words. I can picture the pudgy legs and puddles.
I loved this imagistic poem, Rachel, and I loved your comment about wanting to write more!
What a sweet poem! I love the jackets and crocs and the pudgy legs. Also “wet tushy”– such a great visual image of pretty much any park today in my neck of the woods.
Rachel, I like how the poem’s title clearly marks the date (for memory, for history). Your poem tell a story in 22 words, yet I know the setting, characters, and plot development. Well done. Thank you for sharing with us!
Spring
is that thing
with feathers,
no, maybe
that’s hope, see,
I get con-
fused sometimes,
what with all
the rain and
dreariness.
___________________________________________
Thank you, Leilya, for your poem and your prompt today! “Breath of light” is a beautiful phrase!
Yes, spring is with feathers and with hope, and with rain too! Thank you, Scott! I like how you broke “con-fused.” It made me to slow down and think about things that can be “fused,” and to me it is generative, productive.
Scott, what fun this poem is! I love the light playful tone. Your way with words and how you bring a prompt to a new level continue to amaze me.
I appreciate the ending. Like, hello! Can we get some sunshine??
This poem is spot on! I laughed at your line, I get confused sometimes. It’s true that from day to day in April it’s hard to tell winter from spring!
Hilarious and true, Scott! Love the break of “confused” to make the syllables work. Playful – even a bit mischievous. Perfect and unbroken flow of thought, even from the title, and a delight to read,,, despite the rain and dreariness.
I think Spring has feathers too! This makes me want to jump in muddy puddles—appreciate the humorous turn in the recognition of rainy season.
Hi, Scott — Gave me a grin. I am sitting here listening to the thunder in the distance and watching the sky turn really dark. Or maybe that’s the feathers. Hugs, Susie
Very clever, Scott. I love the allusions and voice.
Thanks for your prompt, Leila! It was perfect for today’s spring thunderstorms.
April Showers
thunder booms
lightning cracks
sky in half
rain drenched paths
soak my shoes
discomfort
but the ground
drinks, flowers
heal the air
Chea, thank you for your poem. It’s thunderstorming where I am an I thought to write about that as well. I love the positivity in your third stanza.
Thank you, Chea! Yes, I, too, woke up to flood warning. It’s been thundering and storming in Louisiana as well. Love your closing stanza:
“but the ground
drinks, flowers
heal the air”
Healing is so much needed today!
Chea, this poem is beautiful. The two stanza’s of the storm, and then the sweet “but” stanza. You did so much in that short third stanza. Amazing images and wonder in just those last nine syllables.
It reminds me a little of Kate’s with a beautiful twist in the third stanza: https://www.ethicalela.com/when-spring-speaks-in-tricubes/#comment-102636
Hi Louisiana Leilya! Thanks for the prompt. I love your focus on the actions of “pause-look-see”. There is a lot to ponder in the difference between looking and seeing.
This spring may
be different
from others.
Growth, maybe.
A seedling,
possibly.
Hopefully
this one will
be different. ~
Hi, Angie! Let’s hope this spring is different, and each seedling takes on a healthy path to growth. Beautiful words!
I can really relate to your poem because I lost two friends to cancer last spring. I hope for a different experience, so your words really resonated with me. Thank you.
So interesting… we look for the same signs of spring each year: the crocuses, the forsythia. But really: we’re hoping for something new, something different than where we’ve been.
I love the hope here for a different spring!
Angie, I like the hope and wondering in your poem. It makes me have questions with the maybe…possibly…hopefully. And yet, it’s filled with potential.
I really like how you used this prompt to relate to what’s happening right now, instead of what spring should look like.
Leilya, I loved your mindful poem that urged us to slow down. Much needed.
A series of serendipitous moments resulted in my poem. I’m doing some mindful journaling in a journal by Tara Ward (called “Mindful Journaling — highly recommend this book!) and had just reflected on crocuses — which were the first image of this year’s first verse love prompt! So your prompt’s timing couldn’t have been better.
“Croc-a-licious”
Crocuses
(or croci??) –
first flower
of young spring
(besides the
nodding snow-
drops, buried
under snow,
invisible)
The croci’s
tightly closed
buds are
slow to ope:
miserly
with their beauty.
Weather warms.
As the spring
advances,
revealed are hopeful
yellow stamen inside
purple white bodies.
As stiff March
breeze blows, they
tremble with fear
of freeze, close
up again
to protect
themselves as
they wait impatiently
for spring’s warmth
reminding me in
my warm bed
that I, too,
must brave the
world’s coldness and
get to work.
Ha, that title is awesome.
Love this stanza:
Love this title! Those little crocuses I look for every March. They reassure me. Then I truly know SPRING is COMING! Lovely poem.
Wendy, your poem is love from the first word! Love the title–incredibly fitting. Along with you, I watch croci buds react to weather change and warms up. I can “see” them “tremble with fear” of the cold. I like how you draw connection between nature and you in the face of world’s coldness. Thoughtful! Thank you for the book suggestion; I will check it out.
I have wondered about the croci/crocuses issue, too! I favor “crocuses,” but I’ll do whatever makes a syllable count work out.
Wendy, I love the progress of your poem, and I can imagine you writing from bed to share this poem. Your title is particularly striking.
Me The Metamorph
chrysalis—
suspended
in the mess
disintegrate
rehabilitate
integrate
die. be born
again, die.
be reborn
Whoa, the verbs and the repetition. Amazing in such a few words!!
Thank you!
This was a perfect poem for me to read today because I’m reading Me (Moth) right now. That last stanza is genius – the flow of be born/again, die. ::chef’s kiss:: The imagery of suspension is also brilliant. I loved every word.
Thank you. I have added this book to my library! It sounds so good!
This one is gold! I love that last stanza, especially, and I can hear all your “s” sounds at the beginning, like a song.
I love how writing poetry does the things without meaning to do the things. At least that is my experience. I often find it did literary things I was unaware of; I am curious if others have the same experience.
Kacey, thank you for writing today. And yes, poetry sometimes works out, or should I say works in the literary. Your poetic mind crafts mysteriously. I love the idea of rebirth as a part of living-dying circle. I also thought about Me (Moth) when I saw your title. Great novel.
Thank you for this fun form today, Leilya! My poem is inspired a bit by the news I received a few days ago that me and my family will be moving long-distance once more, so this helps me process it out a bit.
Count each seed,
Sow in soil,
Sprinkle water.
Put down roots.
So easy, nature
Can do it.
Yet unfolding
Green tendrils
Can snap, break.
Spider-like paths
In dirt can
Drown with rain.
Pink blossoms
Promising fruit can
Become wind-shredded,
Blown somewhere
New. Seeds repeat:
Put down roots.
The ending of your poem is so good. Spring is always such a great metaphor for almost everything in life. There is so much comfort when rooted to that truth. I enjoyed the depiction of storms and colors that swirl like a whimsical wind throughout. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Jordan — You certain captured the flip side of this moving. I’m thinking of the trees that send out those long tendril roots that communicate with other trees. Maybe this is the promise of verselove…the root that connects, growing bigger and stronger even as we all move around. You have roots here. Susie
You capture the process so completely. Favorite Stanza:
Blown somewhere
New. Seeds repeat:
Put down roots.
Jordan, I read your poem after the context you provided about a long-distance move, so I was expecting a bit more dramatic exploration of uprooting and was happy to see your trust in nature: “Seeds repeat:/Put down roots.” I wish you an easy move and smooth adaptation in a new environment. Sending winds of hope your way.
I love this form and the content! It feels, to me, as bright as springtime.
My poem brainstorm started out focusing on the flowers and growth, but evolved into a little story about my son, Cooper, who thinks all bugs, creatures, are his “best friend”, and is immediately followed with, “look mom, I love him!”
Spring has come,
Fresh rainfall –
Petrichor
New life, growth
Son shines, happy
Dirt blankets
Finding worms,
Called creatures
His “best friends”
Thanks for reading!
Betsy, your poem is lovely and I love your son’s thoughts about the bugs. He reminds me of my daughter when she was little (she just got her driver’s license last week). I would be pushing her in her stroller and she’d scream, “Mom! Look out. You almost ran over that ant.”
I remember trips to the zoo — she spent more time watching out for her chipmunk friend (who followed us around the country to all the zoos!).
Yes! He somehow manages to find “the same” cricket everyday. It’s too funny!
Oooh I love this! “Petrichor” is the perfect word – and the image of your son finding worms in the “dirt blankets” – that is Spring in a nutshell!!
Petrichor: that was the word I was trying to remember yesterday afternoon when it just started to rain! I love the linking of spring with your son with the line “Son shines.”
Betsy, your son and my grandson would be best friends. I love that you weave a story into the poem. It makes the poem alive. Of course, they are “best friends”! I wish we could re-learn kindness and openness from our kids. Thank you for sharing!
Good Morning, Leyla, et. al,
Phew. Tricubes call for a tall glass and some adult beverages. I appreciate the brevity of this poetic style and your Wednesday “Soft green stretch.” Writing in this way is like playing with Play-do, and having to make a perfect rectangle. Fun for the fingers. Bring on the tissues…it’s the season of the sneeze.
Sternutation
tree buds bloom
volcanoes…
lineage.
spermatic
green windshields,
wiper blades.
flank Flonase,
left nostril…
mayonaise.
BR — I had to laugh as I have that Flonase right here and battle “gargling oysters” if I don’t use it. I LOVE the title and have never used the word till TODAY…STERNUTATION. Achoo! Thank you for cubing up. Susie
“Left nostril… mayonaise.” hits a little too close to home today! I think my whole house has been fighting mayo all spring! Thanks for the giggle.
Morning, Bryan! When you mentioned tissues, I was preparing to tear up, and then… I read your poem. First of all, I had to consult the dictionary to clarify the meaning of the title (always grateful for vocab lesson). But Flonase and mayonnaise are epic. I will now have this weird association in my mind and probably completely stop using mayonnaise. Thank you, friend!
The best humor is sheer truth, and you have got it down, friend! Steroids, antibiotics, decongestant, Flonase, all the things and tissues…..you speakin’ my language.
FLAME THROWER:
SPRING SIREN
[Cercis Canadensis]
I trust her,
our neighbor
Canada;
embarrassed
at White House,
I planted
a gorgeous
Redbud tree
on my hill.
New Redbud,
amalgam….
old and new;
scientists
created —
I trust her
red, yellow,
fire orange leaves
will follow.
I trust her
slow starting,
keen sharp pink,
then warming,
she reaches
in quiver
for arrows
each afire —
Flame Thrower.
Maybe I should call this a √9. Square root of nine??? Yikes, numbers! My head is going to explode! Susie
Susie, I am not Math person, so I let you decide. Lol. As for your poem, you nailed it.Love your act of resistance in response to being “embarrassed / at White House” and planting “a gorgeous / Redbud tree.” I also am attracted to the odea of paralleling your trust to Canada and trust to the tree – neatly done! Thank you!
I love each thread of this poem! Tying the spring imagery to science and current politics is masterful as it comes through each part of this tricube. The repetition of “I trust her” creates such a faithful tone that it is hard not to have a bit of hope when looking at “fire orange leaves.” Thank you for this poem today!
Susie,
Who care about math when you’ve crafted this lovely nod to Canada and nature’s flame thrower flower. Love “I trust her” and the way you use that line to say nature is on Canada’s side. Very cool poem. Love the photo.
Gorgeous poem, Susie, and I love the accompanying photo. Your opening shares my own feelings, and your focus on the sense of trust and touch is exquisite. I really appreciate your word choices from the “keen sharp pink” and in quiver/for arrows”. Who knows what flames will be thrown in the near future. Thought-provoking poem!
So beautiful!
Vivid and pointed – – I love this so much!
Go Out: Play
Childhood —
Spring meant play,
outside fun.
Young Adult —
no time to
play outside.
Motherhood —
discover
spring anew.
©️Jennifer Kowaczek
Leilya, thank you for today’s prompt. Spring is my favorite season and I did lose the joy for a “season” just after college. I found my way back and then all over again as a mom.
I appreciate the quiet symmetry of your poems. Thank you, Jennifer, for sharing.
So much truth in your poem – I’m right there with you, discovering Spring anew as a mother!
Yes! Those slow walks with young children make you see SO much!
Jennifer, I love how this poem reveals your openness to being a kid again with your own kids. That’s how I feel about my grandchildren. They bring out the spring in me.
Jennifer, I like how you structured your poem from childhood to adolescence, and to adulthood. I find your progression very relatable. I am in post-motherhood phase and still have little time to spend outside. Thank you for writing today!
Jennifer,
Agree, agree! I feel you.
I absolutely love this poem and can relate to also being a mother. This will be my first spring with my daughter, and this makes me so excited to see spring in new eyes again. Thank you for sharing this!
Leilya,
thanks for hosting and sharing your gentle poem. I love the way this line makes me feel spring in my body:
———————————————————
Bikeless Spring
Other years
riding through
grape koolaid
I stopped for
purple buds
sent photos north
now injured
spring has sprung
without me
Sharon, I’ve been injured during the spring (broke my leg) and felt very much the same. I hope your healing goes well.
I love the way you thread purple through the first two stanzas in contrasting ways and the mystery the word “north” evokes. So many meanings so few words. The images and emotions are perfect.
Thank you for your poem! Your poem makes me think back to summers in my neighborhood and riding bikes everywhere with my friends – how sad I’d be to miss out when I was sick or out of town. I commiserate with you!
such cool lines
Oh no – I sense how you miss your bike rides! I hope you will be able to do so again…”Riding through grape koolaid” has me mesmerized.
Sharon, I am so sorry you have to give up biking this spring. Hope you heal fast and catch up during summer. I feel longing for “purple buds” in your poem. Get well soon!
I love how these lines contain more than what is on the page. Thank you, Sharon.
Leilya,
This was the just right form for my photo of the day. I love how your poem has the steady rhythm of the three syllables and invites us to appreciate spring with hope and light. The constraint of 3 syllables helped me be concise.
In spring, red
dances with
yellow light.
Buds become
butterfly,
bee feeders.
Painted walls
fill my heart
with delight.
This Photo Wants to be a Poem
Love the images of the poem! I also enjoy the title at the end; how smart is that? I can see a photo in my mind. Absolutely lovely.
Margaret, thank you for your poem. And thank you for directing me to your photo. I shared my email and I look forward to receiving your blog in my email.
What a lovely mural to pair with your poem. How fitting! I love the motion in your poem, too. “red dances with yellow light” – without the mural, it makes me think of my red chickens running around the yard, catching bugs and scratching the dirt. With the mural, I can see where the inspiration stems from. Thanks for sharing!
Love this, Margaret – especially the image of red dancing with yellow, and my favorite stanza:
Buds become
butterfly,
bee feeders.
Margaret, thank you for attaching a link to the photo. The poem became more vivid. I love dancing lights and buds turning into feeders for butterflies and bees in your poem. I, too, can’t pass painted wall without stopping and looking. Incredibly rich poem!
I just had to click on that link to see the inspiration! How delightful. The image you painted with words matched so well with the mural!
Especially love the middle stanza. But also the connection to art. Thanks.
Margaret, such a lovely spring tricube – – I love your interplay of color and light dancing. Perfect!
Dear Leilya (what a lovely spelling of your name!),
I love how this constrained form really makes me focus on every word, every syllable. Nothing wasted. In your poem, I really liked how you moved from Spring as specifics about the season to the idea of the “Spring” we can find in the hearts of friends.
Irresistible Beckoning
Outdoors calls:
“Come join me!
Soak in the
luscious green
new growth all
around you.
Take it all
in, for Spring’s
joy is brief.”
Joy is as brief as spring!! Your work speaks splendor and truth! Nice work!
Thank you, Julie! You are so kind. Your poem makes me want to go outside and “join in” this spring joy. It is brief, indeed, so I am with you about taking it all in and feeding my body and soul. Thank you for sharing.
Julie, I like how you used the quotation marks. It made me have to look back and remember who was talking. I am feeling beckoned outside to “soak in” and “take it all in”
Hi Leilya! Love your prompt and spirng. It’s 8 days till my birthday, so this prompt is easy for me! It just came tumbling out. I really like the tri-cube cadence too.
When Spring Speaks
When spring speaks
Her whispers soft
Gentle rain
Dew on grass
Purple and pink
Flowers bloom
Hope is here
Greening world
Spring returns
Joanne, I fell in love with the first stanza: “Her whispers soft / Gentle rain.” And then you walked me through grass and blooms and brought me hope. Beautiful poem! Thank you.
This is beautiful! Spring does bring about feelings of hope. The return of color and life always makes me feel hopeful, and so does this lovely poem.
Joanne, I almost used the word “greening” today and love it here in your poem. It really is so representative of hope. Love the colors and the water here – the life-giving force
Joanne, this was lovely with all of its color imagery!
Leilya, I appreciate the quickness this form brings to creating a new poem. I was able to quickly draft my annoyance with our weather today;)
woke icy ten
backwards, wild
frigid chaos
sixty night
unknown layers
perplexed feels
nature’s mom
spring, winter
or summer?
Stefani, one of my thoughts this morning when I read the prompt is how very different spring looks from place to place. Your unknown layers and perplexed feels covey the frigid chaos well. Brr! The forecast here is 90 degrees in the next couple of days..are we actually HAVING a spring??
Oh, my, Stefani! I can’t imagine “icy ten backwards” right now. This doesn’t feel like spring at all. I visited Colorado in mid March, and it was around 25 at night. I thought that was cold. I like your question in the final stanza that really makes me pause and think about the nature’s mom. It really depends where we are.
Spring can be fickly and you captured that precisely!
I meant “fickle!”
Stefani, as we say in Georgia – we awake in Winter, see a summer afternoon, and go to bed with springtime windows open – – so this resonates with me and brings me right to your place in the world where the weather changes so drastically from one hour to the next.
Stefani,
I totally agree with you from here in Upstate NY. Sleet today, 60’s another day. Don’t like this! XD. Can’t wait til sun comes back to stay.
Thank you for the inspiration of your Tricube. I love the short and condensed form. And your verse was heart warming like I hope spring should be, filled with new!
lLiving on a lake spring comes with added sights of migratory birds stopping by and increased activity once the ice is gone. So much to inspire me today. My draft is below
Lake ice melts
Waters rise
Boats arrive
Birds return
Ducks take flight
Chirps increase
Shore up dock
Toes test temp
Joy Begins!
Christine, I love the feeling of toes in the water and the joy it brings. Welcome spring!
! feel the anticipation in every line, Christine! Your words paint the pictures clearly in my mind. The power of well-chosen words!
Christine, your second stanza really brought nature to life with birds, ducks, and chirps. Just a few well-chosen words, and you painted your spring picture. Here is to the joy!
I love the assonance of “ice,” “rise,” “arrive,” “flight,”…
Ooooh I’m right there with you as toes test temp……I can feel the hope of warmer water on the way and clenching teeth to hope it isn’t still too icy.
Leilya, thank you for this celebration of spring pared down to the soft green stretch and breath of light. So, so beautiful. Thank you also for the simple tricube form! Every word must carry its weight – a good exercise.
Spring’s Message
Morning sky
streaked rose-gold:
heaven’s yawn
Birdsong praise
rising on
wings of dawn
Green-robed earth
resurrects—
loss is gone
Fran, your lines leading up to heaven’s yawn welcome your reader into your message. Thank you for sharing today.
Fran, I reread your poem at least three times before I typed your name. Your imagery coupled with metaphors: morning sky-heaven’s yawn and birdsong praise-wings of dawn. This is not just a careful observation; this is poet’s craft at its best. Love hope at the end. Your final line reminded me of a phrase I always knew but recently hear in a movie: when something old ends, something new begins. We all seem to know that, but somehow dismiss. Thank you for you gift of a poem today!
“Green-robed earth / resurrects” (delicious wording here)
I totally LOVE this – heaven’s yawn – birdsong praise – green-robed earth. It goes so well with my poem today. We are on the same wavelength, Fran. You are good company!
Fran, I read this poem over and again, each time getting something new and hopeful! I love how the last line in each stanza rhymes, and could see these three lines standing on their own with beautiful results.
So much to love here, Fran – – the colors, the sounds, the feeling of spring. That birdsong praise I can hear – – and knowing you have an emerald robe, too as mentioned from a blog when you saw the meteor streaking across the sky – – I can see you in the poem right alongside the green robed earth.
“heaven’s yawn” . . . what an image!
Fran, I appreciate your powerful allusion and the images throughout your poem are striking. I especially appreciate “streaked rose-gold: heaven’s yawn” and “Green-robe earth/resurrects-” Stunning, gorgeous poem!
Leilya, thank you for hosting with this fun prompt today! Just thinking about spring and setting a focus on the time of warmth and growth brings joy. Love your verbs, and reminders to pause-look-see.
Springtime Tricube
umbrellas
daffodils
rain showers
butterflies
Easter eggs
wildflowers
hummingbirds
sunshine’s warmth
trees tower
You have my favorite descriptions in this poem!! Easy flowing and springy!! Exemplifies a Georgia Easter!!
Kim, every image here embodies the freshness, renewal, color, and wonder of spring. Seeing it all, walking in the warm sunshine under the towering tress, we remember: Earth is alive and glorious.
Kim, such a great list to get us centered on a spring awakening. Thank you for sharing today.
Kim, you are so right: “Umbrellas / daffodils / rain showers.” This is what I saw this morning as I was hurrying to get to the convention center in Lafayette. All the signs of spring, warmth, and joy are in your words. The rhyming of final words in stanzas–showers, wildflower, and tower–add to sound flow and intensify the message. Thank you for your poem today!
I love how you chose individual three syllable words for your poem! And each one carries such springtime promise! Love this
I love how you worked rhyme into this, too.
Kim, I love how you incorporated rhyme and catalogue in this tricube poem. Every detail adds a delicious sense of joy. Beautiful!
Good Morning, Leila and Poets,
I had a grand time scribbling this morning. I love a constraint like a tricube gives me.
bud scales fall
leaving scars
on the twigs–
of a branch
on a tree.
Evidence–
Spring protects
each new leaf
unfolding.
Linda, I, too, love a constraint from time to time. Love the unfolding story here and the depiction of nature’s power and healing.
Linda, I have a festival of spring in each poem today. Your poem unfolds, to borrow your word, with buds and new leaves. I love the final stanza turning spring into a caring persona. Thank you!
The reminder of the power and resilience in nature is refreshing. I need to hold on to that feeling all day!
Linda, a short construction forces concise word choice and you’ve chosen beautifully–scars, evidence, unfolding. I love this view of spring arriving.
Ah, that is so precious. I love the science lesson in this sweet poem. I like the three lines in a row starting with prepositions. It makes us go visually from the tiny size of the bud scale all the way to the whole tree.
Leilya, you invite us to lose ourselves in spring and all that it brings today! It’s a favorite time of year–I live to watch all that bursts forth and hear the return of birds. Thank you for this glimmer into newness.
Spring Poets
Poetry
Awakens
In April
In the sound
Of new words
Unfurling
In the light of
Alphabet buds
Uncurling
new words unfurling such a perfect rhyme for Alphabet buds/ Uncurling. Nice!
How perfect a tribute to spring AND VerseLove, Jennifer! The comparison of words to leaves and buds is so lovely – and so true. I once heard someone say they could hear the daffodils popping open; “the sound of new words unfurling” in our minds is akin to that. A delight of a poem
Jennifer, you had a huge success with your prompt yesterday and seemed tirelessly responsive. Today, you are writing with me so early in the morning. Your words touch my heart with “new words / unfurling” and “alphabet buds / uncurling.” Such a heartfelt tribute to poets in April. Thank you!
Jennifer,
i am here for
Thanks for bringing alive all the hope of poetry!
Yep i agree with everyone about the “alphabet buds” so, so clever!!
Oh, beautiful!! I love everything about this, and especially the symmetry of the last two stanzas – the image of words coming awake. Honestly makes me tear up.
Thank you for showing the awakening that is this month in nature and in poetry.
That whole first stanza steals my heart – – and unfurling and uncurling as final words in stanza 2 and 3 rhyme so beautifully and keep the rhythm of spring. Love it, and love what you did with the Canva too!
Jennifer — I especially like the “sound/Of new words/Unfurling” …”uncurling” … Lovely. April is special and poetry ensures that. Aah…how good! Hugs, Susie
Jennifer, what a perfect spring poem. Nice topic for this spring poem. I’m picturing those “alphabet buds / uncurling”
To converse
With a forest
Just think green
Bruised heart
Tender thoughts
Violet
Solar drop
Warm thimble
Buttercup
What a great idea to begin with the word “To.” A how to poem works great with this form. Ending with Buttercup makes me happy.
Gregory – brilliant word choices! So unexpected: bruised heart, solar drop, warm thimble…they work here so beautifully, laced with colors of green, violet, and even buttercup. You have managed to capture the rawness, tenderness, and enchantment of spring in this spareness of form – what a wonder! And: I should love to converse with a forest.
Gregory, thank you for each word carefully chosen and sequenced in perfect harmony. The second stanza stole my heart!
Applauding the last stanza, Greg (my favorite)
Thank you for a cool prompt! May your Louisiana spring be blessed.
Backwood thoughts
Hooting owl
,
Whooperwhill,
Back fence chirps.
Mockingbird,
cawing,
Crow
Back woods yelp
Sparrow, finch,
,
afternoon,
Background scene.
Bumblebees,
Dogwood blooms
Back, memory.
Dragonfly,
Butterfly,
Backporch sigh.
Coffee smoke,
hymns.
Pecan slice,
Cricket
Barefoot strolls,
Dew drenched beard,
Backwood chorus.
Fishing pole,
toads.
lily pads,
Croaking
Rabbit flags,
Grasshoppers,
Backyard stage.
Take me back,
Back to then,
Spring, Amen
Oh, the sensory details! I just want to skip school and go outside in my bare feet. Can I? Can I?
Boxer, I am loving all the life in every line – the sights and sounds, especially the birds. The wordplay with “back” is fantastic!
What a living-breathing poem, Boxer! You brough in birds, insects, sounds, colors, and morning coffee aroma–this poem is a generous, rich feast to all of my senses. Thank you for this gift. I will share it with my students. Live the emojis too!
EMOJIS! Always appreciate a good toad. Wonderful playfulness with the task of today.
Especially love the breaths in “Dragonfly, Butterfly, Backporch sigh”!
Right from the first line – – I am awaiting the return of our trio of Great Horned Owls, so you have me in the right frame of mind. I love the way you have put little icons in here, somewhat like a rebus I remember from the Weekly Readers. It’s fabulous! Love the feeling of rural Georgia here.
Boxer — I really LOVE your images…so rich, loaded and juicy. I grew up out in the middle of nowhere, and the details you’ve included are so real, so spot-on…”fishing pole/lily pads…croaking… sometimes when I drift back to those images, I get all choked up, senses filled with deja-vu. Thank you, Susie
I like small 3×3 formats
Thanks, Leilya
Kevin
A moment
of breathing,
in the woods
Stop – note the
uncurling
green branch buds;
this small grove
of elm trees
awakens
I love a format that brings me in to a few syllables too. The slowing down to consider and count is like medicine for me. “breathing/in the woods” is also like medicine. Lovely.
The keys are stopping, noticing…the messages are all around, waiting to be received. A moment of breathing in the woods…yes. Give me that!
Good morning, Kevin! I want to be in your poem to experience that “moment of breathing.” Love noticing small changes in nature, like “uncurling green branch buds.” Amazing word choices!
Vivid and inspiring! I see music flowing through the forest and appreciate the budding elms. Nice work!!
Amazing rhythm in stanza two, modeling how syllables (when strung together) create varying rhythms. Wonderful.
This is such a reflective moment of a poem. Breathing and coming to life. I love the verbs you chose!
Kevin– the “uncurling” hit home. I was up on the hill this morning and again this afternoon, looking at the “uncurling”… it feels so hopeful, so new. You’d think after a zillion years of watching this stuff so closely that I wouldn’t continue to be amazed…Nope, ALWAYS amazed. Thank you for taking me there, Susie
I love the breath, the pause, the awakening. Lovely.