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Denise Krebs is a retired teacher after 30 years in the classroom. She spends her days  on the lookout for the good in people and the world. Some days it’s harder than others. She lives with her husband in the Mojave desert. She is a grandma of one, and her daughter is working on number two as we speak. This year Denise is writing a poem a day for the Stafford Challenge. She blogs at Dare to Care.

Inspiration 

Dean Young is a surrealist poet who wrote “True/False” in 2006. I ran across part of his poem in this True/False post on Poetry Foundation when I was looking for a poem about jury duty. (Go figure!). 

His number 5 statement was “I like jury duty.” Is that true or false? Does he like jury duty? We aren’t sure–we just know it is either true or false. He wrote 100 items and did not disclose which were true and which were false. We can do the same. What True and False statements would you write?

If you aren’t feeling true and falsy today, here’s another possibility for a list poem. With a simple title of “How to Make an Empty Cardboard Box Disappear in 10 Steps,” Clint Smith wrote a surprising and grim list poem:

Clint Smith’s poem is from the collection Counting Descent (Page 52)

You can watch Clint Smith talk about writing poetry and the teacher whose comment inspired him to become a writer.

Process

  1. Write a numbered list of True/False statements in the style of Dean Young.

OR

  1. Surprise your readers with a list of “How to _____ in 10 Steps” like Clint Smith did.

OR

  1. Write a list or catalog poem of any kind, numbered or not numbered.
    • Each item in your list can be a full line, a phrase or even a singular word and on any topic–shopping, desires, make-believe creatures, seasons of life, inventory of a drawer, family members, foods, locations, students, etc., etc.
  2. However you write your list poem, choose a title to do some work in your poem. 
  3. As always, write whatever you want today–in list or no list format! 

Denise’s Poem

True/False

By Denise Krebs
After Dean Young

  1. I am much younger inside than I appear.
  2. Jury duty is for the birds.
  3. Ishmael is also a son of Abraham.
  4. Guns have no constructive purpose.
  5. The enemy has damaged everything in the sanctuary.
  6. The day you eat it your eyes will be open.
  7. I don’t need a reason.
  8. There is chaos in spilled milk.
  9. You can have too much storage space.
  10. That tiny silver sliver in the sky is still full.
  11. The computer in my pocket rules the day.
  12. Dean Young was an ordinary poet.

Your Turn

Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. Also, please be sure to respond to at least three writers. Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming. If you’d like to invite other teachers to write with us, tell them to subscribe.

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Saba T.

How to be An Accidental Educator
1. Study something you thought you’d be good at but aren’t.
2. Dream of being a writer.
3. Also dream of being a figure skater.
4. Never learn to skate.
5. Learn a bunch of random, irrelevant facts instead.
6. Irrelevant information leads to research.
7. Research leads to answers that lead to more questions.
8. Answering questions with questions is a unique talent.
9. Teaching high school requires unique talents.
10. Apply for a teaching job just for laughs.

EMVR

I never tell a lie
hello?
goodbye.

Denise Krebs

Ah, isn’t this clever? It’s a fun child’s rhyme. Love the question mark and the ending of the conversation.

Andrew H.

Short and sweet! I am interested to know who your have conversing in this poem, as it seems like someone told a random person that they never lie and then left the conversation (which is funny to picture).

M M

False Truths
1. I am tired
(no, I am exhausted)
2. I am hungry
(no, I am ravenous)
3. I want to go to bed
(well, at least I love sleep)
4. Literally no one would pay attention
(so, half the class was trying to pay attention)
5. My break was chill
(actually I did stuff but don’t care about anything I did enough to mention)
6. It’s cold outside
(no, that was this morning)
7. I might quit and join the USPIS
(no, despite being soulmates with the post office, I am too stubborn to quit teaching)
8. How are you? Good!

Denise Krebs

MM,
I love how you did this with the “False Truths” title and parentheticals. “Soulmates with the post office” Haha! I like how the numbered lines are things we might say so easily. The parentheticals give the nuance that makes them more interesting and truer. Thanks for writing today!

EMVR

I love all of the unstated things we never say in normal conversations. The parenthetic phrases are a cool way to do that.

WOWilkinson

I love the asides after each statement.

Andrew H.

Your idea of having every one of your lines be false, and then including the actual truth under them, was very interesting! This poem really represented the idea of saying one thing, while hiding the underlying truth inside. I especially enjoyed the positive nature of #4, its a really glass half full persepective.

Stacey L. Joy

Denise, I am in love with this prompt. I recently taught List Poems to my students and they loved it. But, I hate that I’m posting late. However I have to take my own advice in Week 2 and do what I can. I dictated my thoughts in the car on my way home after two after work meetings and dance practice. 😩 Then I said, just share! It’s okay if it’s drafty and unfinished.

Declaring Independence from Self

We hold these truths…
None of my selfies get deleted
I gently kiss the mirror when I awaken
Meditation without distraction is possible
My skin reminds me of love and care

We hold these falsities…
Photos belong in memories
Mirrors don’t reflect all of me
Breathing in and out is meditation
Skin is a silent killer of joy

©Stacey L. Joy, April 9, 2024

Denise Krebs

Oh, Stacey, I love the idea of how we hold these truths, but then the other thoughts are there as well. Not absolute falsities or opposites, it seems. Some of my favorite lines: “None of my selfies get deleted.” “My skin reminds me of love and care” and “Breathing in and out is meditation.”

I’m reflecting on the second list now. Thank you for joining us during your busy week. (Btw, thank you for the lovely encouragement video you made for us as we started week 2.)

Emily Cohn

Lots of different ways this could go, and what a great invitation here! Thanks for the mentor poems, including your own. Love the invitation to ambivalence! I was going one direction but then was inspired by other poems here.

Last year, the Class Bully Died at 21 (true/false)

  1. You were beloved by all who met you
  2. You ate spaghetti at everyone’s mom’s dinner table, you had so many families who loved you
  3. Your mom was too wild
  4. And you were too wild for your dad’s new family,
  5. so you chose to stay with uncle.
  6. We think of him every day
  7. Swerving into that tree was a drunken accident
  8. Only the good die young
  9. We never saw this coming.
Denise Krebs

Emily, wow, I’m sorry for the death of this young classmate. No matter what is true or false, 21 is too young to die. The lines here are hard to read, thinking of him. “Your mom was too wild / And you were too wild for your dad’s new family” is too heartbreaking.

Mo Daley

What a tragic story, Emily. The idea that this person could have been loved while his own family might not have been able to love him is so sad.

Joanne Emery

Thanks, Denise for this prompt. I am coming late to the party, but have thought about through a very busy and joyful day.

So True

School is a joy
that I have known
for sixty-four years now.
I am most at home at school,
I love the smell and sound.

School is a joy
filled with children,
I love getting to know.
They are brimful of optimism,
possibility, and purpose.

School is a joy!
Today was Unicorn Day
in the 2nd grade.
We all chose names,
Mine was Twinkle Cotton Candy.

School is a joy –
Days spent writing and reading
Days spent encouraging and laughing,
Time with children is never wasted,
It is so true!

Denise Krebs

Oh, Twinkle Cotton Candy,
I just happened to be here now, refreshing the page and see this precious joy coming at the end of a long day for you. That first line says everything: “School is a joy” “I am most home at school” I had never thought of that, but that was true for me for many years, as a young person and as a teacher. These stanzas are all so dang adorable!

Kim

Thanks Denise! I went with the How to poem.

How to Maintain Sanity with 37 Days Left in School


  • Introduce students to amazing mentors like Amanda Gorman, Jan Goodall, Rachel Carson and more.
  • Take long walks–everyday–even when you don’t feel like it.
  • On those super stressful days, indulge in a glass of red wine.
  • Make time for some trashy and/or light reading. Get lost in a world different from yours.
  • Keep learning activities light and varied. Remember, students learn and remember more when they’re having fun.
  • Buy yourself flowers (Trader Joe’s is a great source)–smell them, photograph them, enjoy them.
  • Break out the play doh! Give students challenges: make something that is food; create an animal; something with straight and curved lines… Be sure you are building too!
  • Breathe. Breathe in. Breathe out. Repeat as needed.
  • Laugh. A lot. With your family. With your students. By yourself. In your car. In the shower. Just laugh.
  • Write poetry. Read poetry. For yourself and with your students. Leave a poem where someone will find it. Or better yet, post it on your blog! 
Denise Krebs

Ah, Kim, so much great advice! It makes me want to buy some Play-Doh. I have so many favorites–the breathing line, the laughing line, the poetry! Oh my! So, so good. Have you read Ann Burg’s new Force of Nature about Rachel Carson. I hope the 37 days go fast. All the best as you wrap up this year.

Kim

Thanks for the book rec! I’ll definitely check it out!

Mo Daley

Such great advice, Kim. Of course, your last bullet point is the best! I used to be in charge of our mentoring program at school. Your poem makes me wish I had mentors draft a collaborative poem for the new teachers.

Stacey L. Joy

Kim,
This poem gives me life! It’s a love letter to the tired teacher. We have 44 more days and I will embrace your list to get through.

I need to send myself reminders on these tips:

Laugh. A lot. With your family. With your students. By yourself. In your car. In the shower. Just laugh.

Write poetry. Read poetry. For yourself and with your students. Leave a poem where someone will find it. Or better yet, post it on your blog!

Thank you!

M M

Kim, thanks for your poem! And for your advice 🙂 I especially like the walk, breathing, and laughing lines.

weverard1

Kim , this is a fabulous reminder, and I really needed it right now! Great poem; thank you!

Katrina Morrison

A random list of things I can live without

Sneaker squeaking
Endless talking
Terrible TV
Wasting time
Wasted food
Low toilets
Gallows humor
Harmless pranks
Excuse making
Exclusion

Susan O

Oh! you got me there with low toilets and exclusion. Good ones to live without.

Denise Krebs

Katrina, this made me smile. I like the title, and the two word lines, which read so quickly. No wasted words here. Let’s just get rid of all this stuff now! I smiled at “Low toilets” Yes, please!

Cheri Mann

Katrina, what strangeness of coincidences is this that you were typing this poem while I lay awake, unable to sleep with thoughts turning in my head of a different list than what I posted—one of things I can live without! Among mine are some ordinary items like an appendix, an iron, bellybutton lint. I have no idea what shall come of the list.

I also think your poem is interesting if you read the second words only. There is a strange sense of word association with them. Perhaps intended?

Cheri Mann

Thus is just something I’ve quickly typed out because I’m feeling some kind of way lately about being a parent to a 12-year-old going on 16-year-old. When you’ve finished reading this, send help! lol

How to Parent a Tween in 2024: True or False?

Don’t talk to strangers.
Don’t take pictures of them.
Don’t mention who they are or what they
have done—to anyone.
Pretend they don’t exist—until they want to
go shopping for clothes.
Ignore the dirty dishes left in the living room
and the laundry basket right outside their
door they refuse to move.
Don’t look at them when they’re talking.
Or ever.
Allow yourself to be “shush”ed when you
try to respond to a question.
Respond to all text messages immediately.
Now, quickly, before the fifth MOM
Don’t ask them questions.
Pretend they don’t exist.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Cheri, I have not raised a tween in 2024. I have nothing for you, but my how you have captured the attitude in this poem. I loved your introduction “feeling some kind of way lately…” “Don’t talk to strangers” made me laugh. I think all the many “don’ts” in your poem really who how tough it is. Is it time for the barrel yet? All the best, friend!

Barbara Edler

I am definitely feeling your emotions in this poem, Cheri. Raising a teenager is sure hell sometimes. I think it’s a natural thing that occurs, so we want our children to become independent and move on. There’s something truly special about children in the house, but something very dangerous about tweens! Don’t be too hard on yourself and just breathe.

M M

Cheri, I love that you mixed a how-to poem with the true or false prompt! Pairing parenting with the true or false poem highlights how much parenting is full of questions and no right answers. Good luck and enjoy it for all it brings!

True/False Funeral

  1. I heard every word you said
  2. She asked us to pay his loan
  3. The bar owner gave us Guinness on the house
  4. Guinness is spelled with two n’s
  5. The drive across country wasn’t that bad
  6. Three days for bereavement were enough
  7. It’s like it never happened
  8. I am bracing myself for another one
  9. He will forgive his sister for not coming
  10. Grief ends when you decide it does
Denise Krebs

Oh, Sarah, I’m sorry for your loss. (You and Mo both today.) Reading this knowing some may be false is upsetting somehow. Maybe I’ve be reading too many true/false poems today. Lines that make me pause are “It’s like it never happened”, “I am bracing myself for another one” and “He will forgive his sister for not coming” Wow. So many thoughts I’m having. Peace.

Mo Daley

I’m so sorry for your loss, Sarah. Not knowing whether some lines are true or false make your poem all the more gut wrenching. “It’s like it never happened” is the line that really got to me.

Stacey L. Joy

Sending my sincere condolences and warm hugs!
💙

Katrina Morrison

Sarah, thank you for the vulnerability your poem demonstrates and for reminding us how therapeutic writing can be. There is so much in “He will forgive his sister for not coming.”

Emily Cohn

Sarah,
So many beautiful lines to choose from, but wanting to acknowledge your loss and sending you and your family peace. I love the line you start with, and it’s impossible truth. There’s a bit of a back and forth between memory and current moment realities to be dealt with. The last line is so beautiful in its true falseness.
take care.

Barbara Edler

Oh, Sarah, I am just wanting to give you a hug right now. Your first line is the perfect start to your incredibly moving poem. I feel every nuance of every line. I wish we could have a full conversation just to let it all out. Loss is loss. It never ends. and your last line is truly a falsehood which, I believe, is the overriding point. Grief is so incredibly difficult, and society pushes us to just move on. Hugs and peace to you!

EMVR

This is such a powerful poem. It reminds me a lot of Hemingway’s style in his short stories, just scraping the surface and you can’t trust everything people say.

Allison Laura Berryhill

Denise, these are great poetry prompts! I want to try a 10-step poem next! (After I return to yesterday’s prompt and catch up with the rest of you…)

True/False

  1. I love my body.
  2. I love my children equally.
  3. I love my husband.
  4. I love my mother.
  5. I love avocados.
  6. I love to swim in brisk water.
  7. I love unanswered questions.
  8. I love America.
  9. I love marshmallow fluff.
  10. I know what love is.
Denise Krebs

Allison, oh, my goodness. That anaphora…I love…paired with that last line made me laugh aloud. All the loves of our life show we need better English love words, don’t we? Such a perfect take on this prompt.

Allison,

I love how every line is both true and false for me and also “of course” and then “maybe” and then “maybe not” at the same time. I am sure the last line is true — maybe.

Peace,
Sarah

Mo Daley

Allison, your poem makes me think about how many of us toss the word “love” around so casually. Your second line is my favorite… don’t really love them equally? Inquiring minds want to know!

Barbara Edler

Hmmmmm….your poem is truly interesting. I’m just not sure which lines are truth. I’m truly believing lines 2-4 are definitely true. I’m guessing unanswered questions is on the fence. Totally not sure about marshmallow fluff although to me this doesn’t sound like something you’d like, but boy I could be wrong. Such a compelling poem, Allison! I enjoyed thinging about your lines.

Emily Cohn

I mean, perfect. All the supposed givens, you cleverly make us think again, and it becomes kind of rebellious in tone. I love the juxtaposition of America and fluff- this one resonates today!

Scott M

I love this poem, Allison, and that is not a falsehood! I love how each of these lines could have “an element” of “both sides” to them, except, of course, for line five: those are delicious, that’s just a simple truth. (And thank you for your poem reply on mine, too, lol. I enjoyed that as well!)

weverard1

Kasey, I love a good “railing against the system” poem — especially when that system is the educational system. Loved:
Currently, the education system exists as blood food
for capitalist ticks to gorge, gorge, gorge
bellies ballooning with blood.”

and the phrase “soporific growth” — love the juxtaposition of these words.
Great poem!

weverard1

Denise, I loved your poem! And that Clint Smith poem was fire. Here is my attempt today:

How to Step Back in 10 Steps

  1. Tie her shoes and wipe her bottom.
  2. Drop her at the sitter’s and cry in the car.
  3. Glide her off on her bike.
  4. Watch her fall and maim herself (the scar will last forever).
  5. Help her color her hair.
  6. Discover she’s colored her hair.
  7. Survive when she breaks your heart.
  8. Never break her heart.
  9. Break away from goodbye hug.
  10. Break out of old dreams:  Welcome the new.
Denise Krebs

Oh, Wendy, those are not ten easy steps, are they? I love that you start when she’s so little and go all the way to having to welcome new dreams. I just keep reading them over and over, and thinking of my own daughters. Such richness you left here for us today.

Allison Laura Berryhill

Oh, Weverard1!
I love your poem. “Glide” was the word that made me sit up and pay attention. I was intrigued by the order of “Help her color her hair” and “Discover she’s colored her hair.” SO MUCH great stuff to contemplate in this poem. The repetition of Break/Break in the final lines was so good. As a mother of adult children, I’m also breaking out of old dreams and welcoming the new. Thank you.

Oh, Wendy, this is super clever. You had me at the first line and then I returned to the first after the last. So much of each line feels easy and yet not so easy. Possible and yet impossible.

Sarah

Barbara Edler

Wendy, what a delightful title for your poem. The focus on break at the end is truly moving. I especially liked “Never break her heart”. Sometimes change is so hard, and I like the idea of welcoming the new. Powerful poem!

Emily Cohn

Wendy- what a journey those ten steps are! You illustrate those steps in sharp moments, that car crying moment, the discovery of hair color betrayal but not really. Captures the mom daughter dance so well. Thanks for this!

Mo Daley

Musings on a Family Member’s Death
By Mo Daley 4/9/24
·      Wakes and funerals can be fun.
·      Having a house big enough to host siblings overnight is awesome.
·      Being told, “I thought I was looking at your mother when I saw you,” by a family elder
brought a tear to my eye.
·      I’m not good at small talk.
·      The lack of ability to push in a chair is male character trait.
·      A life well lived is its own reward.
·      Family stories and secrets change over the years.
·      The memories never die.
·      Facing mortality is scary.

MathSciGuy

Mo, I’m sorry for your loss! I like how in your poem you captured the some of the moments – special and happy moments that can be filled with laughter – that can happen at a funeral or wake.

Scott M

A lot of truths in this poem, Mo. Thank you for sharing them. (And that third line is what does it for me, both heart wrenching and heartwarming at the same time!)

Glenda Funk

Mo,
I read that first line and thought WTF, but then I remembered the prompt. That was scary close. That said, sending condolences and peace to you.

Denise Krebs

Mo, wow, this is fresh. I like the questionable lines, which may be not quite true, maybe sarcastic. Or certainly they might be true, like the first two. The third one is bittersweet. Then the musings on the memories, stories, secrets, and facing mortality. I’m getting a lot of truth from this rich poem today. Thank you for sharing it this day.

Allison Laura Berryhill

I found as I wrote my own poem, that it’s hard to find a line that is TRULY all true or all false. Your poem gave me opportunities to look at each line as both a truth and a lie. I especially like “Having a house big enough…” because I’ve lived the truth and falsity of that!

Mo,

I am with you in the musings today, and I so appreciate the “being told” part and the way someone can get right into your face and see you in a way you forgot. And the small talk is perfect. You have to do so much of that, and it is exhausting. It brings me to that final line “Facing mortality is scary.” Wow. True and also kind of welcome for me as all of this is a lot to endure.

Sarah

Barbara Edler

Oh my, I am feeling some definite hurtful lines here. Of course, your first line makes me stop and think hold one, are they? Can they be fun? However, there is something special about celebrating a life that’s been long lived and wonderful not so much when the person is your very best friend, a child, or spouse and the whole is too huge to fill. Amen to your final line! Outstanding poem, Mo. I truly love it!

Stacey L. Joy

Mo,
I’m sorry to see that you’ve had a loss in your family. My deepest condolences to you and your family.
💐

EMVR

It’s interesting that so many of these true/false poems are about grief and what an abyss of misery it is contrasted with the lies we tell ourselves.

Tammi Belko

Kasey — So much truth in this stanza:
“Currently, the education system exists as blood food
for capitalist ticks to gorge, gorge, gorge
bellies ballooning with blood.”

It really is all about the money and it, unfortunately, is to the detriment of the students who are stressed out and over tested. It is no wonder that millenials and gen z’s are experiencing a mental health crisis.

Tammi Belko

Denise — this is a great prompt. This will be really fun to use in the classroom. I loved line 7 of your poem! That has been my mantra lately, too!

American Truths

In America a snake oil salesman lines his pockets with money he swindled peddling six dollar Bibles for sixty.

In America a philanderer is a God-fearing man.

The very foundations of America will crumble if everyone doesn’t conform
Same is good, same is safe, same doesn’t scare you.

A bridge doesn’t collapse because it was rammed by a massive cargo ship; diversity, equity and inclusion (DEI) now there’s the culprit!.

Fahrenheit 451 is nonfiction.

You might experience another viewpoint if you read a book.

You might see yourself in a character.

A book could save you

or damn you

Demagoguery lives in the USA.

MathSciGuy

Wow – each line in this poem packs a punch! I liked how specific you started in the starting line – it hooked me!

Denise Krebs

Oh, yes, Tammi! “American Truths” is the perfect title. You go, girlfriend! I wish the country could read your poem. How can they argue with these American truths? “A book could save you / or damn you” is one of my favorites.

Tammi,

Nice — “Fahrenheit 451 is nonfiction” — oh, geesh, scary. And yes, we do hope to see ourselves (maybe) in a character though we may not like what we see. Two things can be true for sure.

So many gems here.

Sarah

Barbara Edler

Tammi, I absolutely adore your line “A book could save you.” Yes, this is so true. I remember one of my first true independent reads in which I found a connection and joy. Powerful poem!

Donnetta D Norris

True or False
I like asparagus.
Teaching is my superpower.
I am marathoner.
I’d like change in my career.
I love to grow.
Today was a good day.
My favorite living this is my dog.
I struggle with the idea of a list a poetry.

Denise Krebs

Donnetta, interesting! I think its true that teaching is at least one of your superpowers. I wonder about asparagus. That can be a dividing vegetable. I liked reading your poem. “I love to grow” is my favorite.

MathSciGuy

I loved the line “Today was a good day.” It makes me feel good to take a moment to recognize that when it’s true. I hope that it was one of the true lines in your poem!

Susan O

I sense some truth but some false here. Do you really like asparagus?
A fun list. Thanks.

Donnetta,

I like this form because we can understand the speaker in the possibilities of truth and in the wondering of how something can be true for you and perceived to be true about you by the reader. Wow.

Peace,
Sarah

Heather Morris

I enjoy list poems.  Tonight, the word change is on my mind, so I went with that.

True or False?

Change is good.
I can change the world.
A change in the weather is coming.
I can buy something with the loose change in my pocket.
It’s time for a change.
A change of clothes is handy.
I changed my name when I married.
Climate change is real.
I have change for a 20.
I love the change in the color of autumn leaves.
I am willing to change

Jennifer Kowaczek

Heather, what a fun way to work with this prompt. I’m going to revisit this prompt at a later date with a word to focus on. Thanks for that spin.

Denise Krebs

I like reading each line and wondering if that aspect of change is true for me (and for you). It is interesting to hear some of these things in light of wondering whether they are true or not. We usually just hear these, no questions asked, like “Change is good.” and “It’s time for a change.” Well, let me think about that a moment. Nice poem today, Heather.

Leilya Pitre

I like an idea to focus on one word, Heather! Exploring all possible meanings and play with phrasing and interpretation sound like fun. I am drawn to “I am willing to change.” Thank you for sharing!

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Heather, the narrator of this poem, sounds flexible and able to deal with change. 🙂
This also seems like an effective poem to use for a formative assessment when we ask the students to choose a word from our current vocabulary list and apply it in a list poem about a real or fictional character we’ve just read about or someone in the news. Hmmm. Thanks for sharing

Heather Morris

I like that idea, Anna.

Donnetta D Norris

Heather, you have a great list of change ideas. I’m not sure it was intentional, but every line ends with a period except the last line, as if leaving space for what you are willing to change.

Tammi Belko

Heather,

I love the positive message conveyed in your poem. I agree “change is good!”

Susan O

I like your list, Heather. I imagine some are false because people rarely have change for a 20 with them and I wonder if one can really change the world.

Barbara Edler

Heather, what a wonderful play with change. I am especially impressed with how you ended with the final line “I am willing to change.” Oh boy, that’s a biggie. I think many of us do change, but I’m not sure we always change intentionally. So many of your lines make total sense like “It’s time for a change” and ” A change of clothes is handy.” I totally agree!

Shaun

Lupo’s Italian Restaurant (T/F)?

To Jimmy and Gus.

At Lupo’s, the cooks always say nice things about the servers, and in Spanish!
I learned to swear in Spanish from the cooks.
The health inspector came last week, and we passed with flying colors!
The three-second rule is in effect.
We only use fresh ingredients.
The Linguine Fra Diavolo is delicious!
This is Utah! Only 1 oz. of booze per drink!
The servers are the cashiers, bussers, AND bartenders.
The drink meters come off when the servers want big tips.
The servers NEVER drink on the job!
You will be glad you dined at Lupo’s Italian Restaurant!

Denise Krebs

Oh, my goodness, Shaun, what a great topic. This is truly frightening to know which are true and which are false. We all make our assumptions, I’m guessing, but I don’t want to. I can imagine you as a young man working here. I’m sure you have lots more stories!

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Susan. This is interesting on several levels: the clever way you describe the scene AND the fact that you learned SPANISH at an Italian restaurant. Oh well. This is the USA and we never can tell who will meet where and what they know that we don’t. One thing we know now is that you know how to pick a good restaurant. Are you employed to promote this eaterie? 🙂

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

OOPS. I meant, Shaun. I’d like to say my computer self-corrected, but alas, I mistyped. Today is true or false day, so. ..:-)

Tammi Belko

Shaun,

I love the scene you have set, and I feel that all of these things both the good and bad could exist in a restaurant setting. I am also thinking that some of the statements we think might be negative could be construed positively, depending on the perspective. Heavy pours are welcomed by many!

Glenda Funk

Shaun,
Where in Utah? I might need to visit this restaurant. It’s a vibe in your poem. Love the cussing line. I learned from students my first year teaching. Also love the three second rule. I know that one from my serving days. I treat servers well because I don’t want strange things happening to my food back in the kitchen!

Kayla

Denise, this is such a fun prompt! I am going to try my best!

True/False Poem
I enjoy reading.
I was a very good athlete in high school.
I like to run.
I know that I am loved.
My favorite movie is Tammy.
I tried honey mustard Dot’s Pretzels for the first time today.
I can do the worm.
I flew the first plane I ever rode in.
I am scared of heights.
My favorite food is pizza.

Rachel S

I love all these points & the underlying question of which are true and false – like “I flew the first plan I ever rode in. I am scared of heights.” Which of the two is true??? Or could both be? Either way, some very impressive facts about yourself! Also, I’m a big fan of honey mustard Dot’s Pretzels.

Denise Krebs

Yes, Kayla, these are amazing. Like Rachel, I am curious. Such simple statements, but fun and interesting. “I can do the worm.” “I flew the first plane I ever rode in.” My mind is blown if that is true. It’s also blown if you just made that up! Brava!

Donnetta D Norris

The fun part of this prompt is we don’t know what’s true or false, but it is true for me that, “My favorite food is pizza”.

Tammi Belko

Kayla — I agree with the comments this is fun trying to figure out which ones are true and which ones are false. Although, I am going to hazard a guess that this one is false –“I flew the first plane I ever rode in.”

Scott M

Kayla, this is fun! Thank you for writing and sharing it. Regardless of the “actual” veracity of statements one and seven, from here on out, I believe that they are, indeed, true: you do “enjoy reading” and you “can do the worm.” Full stop. Truth. Mic drop, and all that, lol!

Barbara Edler

Denise, thank you so much for hosting today. I appreciate your prompt as it lets me purge some of my feelings about the last 9 hours. Okay, now I know in your poem that one of your false statements is “You can have too much storage space.” Yeah, right!

Shits and Giggles Kind of Day:
aka, the Cuckoo Nest is Waiting to Accept Me

I’m having a fanfngtastic day
Smiling every step of the way
Nothing’s bothering me
Texts and calls, let’s see
My predecessor’s happy note
Lifts me so much, I think I’ll float
Successfully filing tax reports
Opening up their fantastic retorts
Even applying for a UEI
Such amazing joy, I think I’m actually high
Nothing is eclipsing today
Yippe-ki-yay!

Barb Edler
9 April 2024

Glenda Funk

Barb,
From the title to that ending line (allusion) this poem is brilliant. I love the rhyme, the ironic-sarcastic tone. Now I want to know what that note says. Something tells me it isn’t a positive greeting. I know what a UEI is, but in your poem it sounds kind of naughty. “Nothing eclipses today”, while alluding to yesterday’s phenomenon, takes on a foreboding foreshadowing in the context of all the other lines and rhymes. Love it and hope writing brought catharsis.

Heather Morris

I had that kind of day. Your poem made me laugh, and I needed that. I love the rhyming couplets.

Denise Krebs

Oh, my, you did purge some feelings! I’m not wishing any more shits and giggles kind of day, but this was inspired. I love the rhyming and the sarcasm throughout. Just magical! And the sweet use of eclipsing in today’s poem is perfect. I hope tomorrow is better.

Leilya Pitre

Barb, your title says it all. I did anticipate a bit more dennotation, but connotations and sarcasm work just great. I can imagine where you want to shove that “predassessor’s happy note.” Rest and have a better day tomorrow. Hugs!

Tammi Belko

Barb — absolutely love the rhythm and rhyme of this poem. You had me laughing as soon as I read the title. I hope you have a better day tomorrow!

weverard1

Barb –
LOL! the tone in this! Loved it.

Cheri Mann

Love that opening line. I wanted to substitute “tax reports” for FAFSA forms. I think we can definitely all relate to your open an the day you’ve had.

Denise Krebs

Kasey, wow! Word choice is right! Images galore too. I find myself wanting to know what you really think. I love all the parentheticals in the signature. Every time I read it, I find some other nugget!

Susan

This is fantastic, Kasey! It’s filled with voice and relates a real edge about the flaws of education. I am all for improving practices, but when legislatures start legislating things like “the science of reading,” I get skeptical because I know there is a money flow in there somewhere.

Your word choice and power makes this so dang strong!

Rachel S

Thanks for the prompt, Denise! I’m not completely sure which of my points & are true and false to me today. They might be different tomorrow. But I enjoyed pondering.

True/False
I know God exists. 
I believe God exists. 
I want to believe God exists.
I feel God’s presence
I see God’s absence. 
I yearn for God. 
I walk away from God. 
I hear God’s voice.
I call out to God. 
I am God’s child. 

brcrandall

And if you add an ‘o’ to God, you get ‘good,’ so God is about doing good, including this poem. God is everything, indeed, Rachel (and I’m fasting with the twins. Eid Mubarak!

Cheri Mann

I love that take on it, Bryan. I reread this dichotomous poem and added an ‘o’ to every god and it creates another poem altogether that is equally as interesting.

Denise Krebs

Rachel, I can agree! Somedays are different for me too. I love what you did here, so gentle and unassuming, so, might I say, full of faith. I especially like these today:

I feel God’s presence

I see God’s absence. 

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Rachel, aren’t you glad that VERSELOVE is a place we can right true/false poems about our faith. This is one of the reasons I’ve remained….and to be able to appreciate it when someone’s poem is a mirror or a window for me. Yours is both … when I look out the window and see nature, I am convinced about a supernatural being whom I address as Father God, and because of what I’ve been taught about this Being, when I look in the mirror I can say with confidence that I am God’s child and therefore a sister to Rachel! Thanks for sharing.

Rachel S

I love that idea of mirrors & windows. Thank you for this sweet comment, sister!

Tammi Belko

Rachel — your whole poem really resonates with me as I often feel in this quandary of emotions, too.

M M

I love this Rachel! The true or false poem was an excellent vehicle to convey your pondering and the reconciliations we all work through as we address our experiences, thoughts, and emotions regarding deity. Your poem felt so very real.

Sharon Roy

Denise,

Thank you for hosting and feeding us this thought-provoking prompt and poignant mentor texts. The Clint Smith poem is so brutally sad.

True or False?

  1. I’m prepared and eager to go back to school after taking yesterday off to watch the clouded eclipse.
  2. I’m going to eat vegan vegetarian vegan for at least a month.
  3. I’m going to find and join a tai chi class.
  4. I’m going to go to yoga tomorrow even if I feel too tired to go.
  5. I’m going to clean out our overcrowded stash-it-all cupboard this weekend.
  6. My friends’ recountings of how they spend their days in retirement sound good.
  7. I’ll be ready to retire soon.
  8. I believe my mom when she says she’ll be okay no matter what happens with her cancer.
  9. I’m going to catch up on all the stupid state online trainings this week.
  10. I’m going to change how I conference with my students about their learning goal trackers even though I’m more than halfway through.
  11. I’m going to plan something fun for today’s date night.
  12. I’m going to focus on what each of my seventh graders is doing well and sing their praises.
  13. I’m going to encourage my friends to get back on track with our reading and practicing of the Built to Move mobilizations.
  14. I’m going to figure out how to keep writing a poem a day after VerseLove is over.
  15. Schroedinger’s cat is alive.
Susan

Sharon,
That’s quite an enterprising list! I sure hope you have success with at least half of them . . . or at least half of the ones that are TRUE!

Denise Krebs

Sharon, you are busy, I can tell. I’m guessing much of this is on your mind now, whether you have worded it as truth of falsehood. Such an interesting list covering a multitude of areas, but that teacher life shines through. I love the “I’m going to figure out how to keep writing a poem a day after VerseLove is over.” And I want it to be true. 🙂 The last one makes me wonder about the impossibility of understanding true or false anything!

Tammi Belko

Sharon —
Your last line “Schroedinger’s cat is alive” is just a perfect ending! Makes rethink your whole poem and this whole prompt. Just love it!

Maureen Y Ingram

Oh my, Denise, the Cliff Brown list is sobering. Thank you for today’s inspiration. This was a challenge!

a dozen things

i am listening
you are in my prayers
let’s get together soon
you haven’t aged a day
don’t believe a thing he says
habit is more dependable than inspiration
your soul is your best friend
tomorrow is a day away
you can’t hurt yourself
i never said i wouldn’t
rocks never change
bless your heart

brcrandall

You have me thinking about rocks, Maureen (and my 9th grade teacher, Ms. Coffin). Phew. Never a more appropriate last name. Her class was morbidly hard – all about rocks. If I recall, it was focused on how they change over very long periods of time, which is why I dreamt of throwing them at her.

Denise Krebs

Wow, didn’t you create a powerful list for interpersonal relationships? Man, how many of these have I said and not meant? Today I’m liking “your soul is your best friend” and “rocks never change” and… Thank you, Maureen. Well done. I like the title too.

Barbara Edler

Maureen, I feel every word of this today. I really appreciate your title, and the lines “you can’t hurt yourself” and “bless your heart.”…..oh yeah, I know what that lovely Southern comment means. I do appreciate a great lie such as “you haven’t aged a day”. Delightful poem….really!

Katrina Morrison

Maureen, I love how you captured so many overused and often trite expressions, and no two are alike. It would be hard to pick a “favorite,” but being from the quasi-South, “bless your heart” “takes the cake.”

Leilya Pitre

Denise, thank you so much for today’s prompt. I love the ideas for all kinds of list poems and hope to try some in these last couple weeks of the semester that we have. Your # 1 and # 7 are and will always be true for me, and # 11 is today’s reality.
I have a little break between the classes, so I am going to post now and will respond to other poems later today. I decided to move away from personal and learn something new today, and you may very well know all these things.

True/False: Ready for a Pop-Quiz? Let’s go!

1.     Birds evolved from dinosaurs
2.     Chameleons change colors only to blend into their environment.
3.     Earth’s oxygen is produced by the ocean4.     A cloud can weigh around a million pounds5.     Flu shots give you a mild case of the flu
6.     It’s impossible to burp in space
7.     Hot water freezes faster than cold water
8.     Humans can see the Great Wall of China from space
9.     Lightning never strikes in the same spot twice
10. Milk helps you grow big, tall, and strong
11. People’s nails keep growing longer after they die
12. Rats laugh when they’re tickled
13. Sea turtles use earth’s magnetic field to navigate
14. Smell is the scent most tuned to memory
15. Sugar makes kids hyperactive and wild
16. Summer is hotter because you are closer to the Sun
17. Taking a photo of something makes your memories of it worse
18. The human stomach can dissolve a razor blade
19. Walking through a doorway physically or mentally triggers the brain to forget
20. We start to forget childhood memories while we’re in childhood

Denise Krebs

Leilya, how fun is this pop quiz. I want to take it, but I’m going to keep it to myself first. Maybe you can give us a key sometime down the road! I am intrigued by #17. I don’t want it to be true!

Leilya Pitre

The researchers say #17 is actually sad truth. We rely on the image, but lose the details of the actual event. Living in the moment to keep the memories is best.

Maureen Y Ingram

#14 fascinates me! I wonder if that is true. I sure never need to know about #12. Fun pop quiz!

brcrandall

Now you have me looking for rats to tickle and scheduling a trip with that British dude so I can see if burping in space is achievable. But #17 is a poetic prompt in itself. What photos do we have that don’t quite capture the moment or if it did, what did it miss? And walking in a doorway? Hmmm. I’m usually focused. I sure do hope I don’t forget. I love the list of trivia.

Susan

This would be such a fun way to assess knowledge about various topics. I’m with Denise . . . I want to know about #17.

Leilya Pitre

See my response to Denise 🙂

Barbara Edler

Leilya, your poem has me pondering several of these lines. I do know for a fact that you cannot see the Great Wall of China from space although Trivia Pursuit try to make this a fact. Although I do know a few of these other points/truths, I would definitely have to search for the truth about a few of these statements like the burping one in space and the razor blade one. What a fun way to invite students to investigate. I love your title and I’ll be checking out a few of these lines soon:)

Glenda Funk

Leilya,
This is a veritable science lesson. I do know dinosaurs evolved from birds, but there’s a whole fish link to evolutionary science. I’m thinking of the book “No Such Thing As a Fish.” This would be a good fact-checking exercise for learners.

Jennifer Kowaczek

This was so fun! I tried my hand at those science questions. I don’t think I got them all.

Angie

Hi Denise, thank you for the prompt. I’m totally in love with “I don’t need a reason” even if it’s true or false. And actually as I started making a longer list of my own, found that most of what I wrote was both true or false depending. But I went with a chance to express a frustration. Clint’s poem, sheesh. I’d never read it either. Powerful.

Rant Over

A lot of people compliment my smile.
I love it when people tell me to smile. 
When people tell me to smile, it always makes me want to smile.
I like myself more when I’m smiling.
Unnecessary repetition is underrated.

Denise Krebs

Angie, brava, my friend! I love this so much. I recently saw a photo collection of little girl portraits where the subject was not smiling. It’s empowering to encourage all the feels. I love the ones here that are probably false. Good for you!

Maureen Y Ingram

I am smiling at this!! Fun list, Angie.

Kayla

Angie, your poem is very fun and thought-provoking. I love the last line that disrupts everything you previously listed. Great job!

Leilya Pitre

Keep smiling, Angie! I smiled reading your poem beginning with the title. I agree with line 4. Who cares how many times we repeat? Let’s smile 🙂

Andrew H.

I absolutely loved this prompt! The ambiguity of whether or not the statements presented in a poem are true or not is an classic poetic concept, and this prompt of making your poem entirely True or False adds an extra layer to that with the reading knowing some of the statements in it are incorrect.

True or False

  1. I love to writing down my ideas and thoughts.
  2. My greatest dream is to publish my own novel.
  3. I teach students because I want them to become better students and people than me.
  4. Helping students is not my favorite part of teaching.
  5. Sometimes I tell someone I understand something even when I don’t.
  6. My favorite hobby is to read.
  7. I am very confident in my skills and experience as a teacher.
  8. Right now, my biggest flaw is procrastination.
  9. I don’t like to talk to people.
  10. I love the feeling of being tired after staying up late working.
Denise Krebs

Andrew, I love reading all these things, knowing they can be real or maybe not. It would be fun to talk about them. I’m guessing that last line is false, and I’m glad you made it here today to join us in spite of the busyness of spring teaching!

An aside, when I wrote my first True/False poem it had 50 items. I enjoyed it because I was free to write things and not worry about whether they were controversial or not. It was a good exercise for someone like me, sometimes after to express my opinion.

Denise Krebs

afraid, I meant.

Maureen Y Ingram

True or false? Oh my, I do not know! Great list!

Kayla

Andrew, I love how each of your items makes me think about whether you are telling the truth or not. When it comes to your career as an educator, I get the feeling that your students love you. Great job!

Heather Morris

This list is so relatable, and I agree with Denise – this would be a great list to discuss with others.

Leilya Pitre

Andrew, thank you for your True/False statements. I think they can all be potentially true depending on the situation, time of the day, your mood, and even weather. On the other hand, none may be true, and it’s up to you what you put in it and up to me how I may interpret each. That’s a beauty of a poem like this.

Katherine Lindsey
  1. I am a poet
  2. But I am not a writer
  3. I am tired
  4. Tired of a world that feels hopeless
  5. Hopeless is a word that weighs heavy on my heart
  6. A word that I feel summarizes the existence of the universe
  7. The universe is shifting
  8. The universe is creating
  9. The universe is writing
  10. I am the universe
  11. I am a writer
  12. but I am not a poet
Denise Krebs

Oh, I love what you did here, Katherine. There are some sadly truthful lines that really get to me: “Tired of a world that feel hopeless / Hopeless is a word that weighs heavy on my heart.”

Angie

Ooo I love how you move from “the universe is” to “I am the universe”!

Maureen Y Ingram

This is a beautiful list poem. Yes, I feel this, too – “Tired of a world that feels hopeless”

Kayla

Katherine, I love that your poem starts and ends with opposing thoughts. I also love that the poem appears like your real thoughts. Great job!

Jeania White

Katherine,
I love the hourglass feel of this poem. Almost Chiastic and the simplicity of it is beautiful and deep and lovely.

Leilya Pitre

Katherine, this is a thoughtful poem that makes the poet and the writer the same in the end. Just this morning my students were writing some “I Am” kind of poems because I asked them to think about their identity crisis at the moment, and one of the students wrote that he was not a poet; he was a fiction writer. I, too, am “[t]ired of a world that feels hopeless.” Thank you for sharing!

Hope G

For some reason, I could only think of true/false statements as an opening for a possible story. Great way to get people and students thinking!

I cannot tell you what is true or false. All I can tell you are the following statements.

  1. Pink is one of my favorite singers.
  2. The end of the world didn’t end with the April 8th eclipse, but
  3. the beginning of the end of my life did.
  4. The just world is grossly unjust.
  5. My favorite cookie is chocolate crinkle, or Thin Mints, or chocolate chip, or snickerdoodle, or the perfect soft sugar cookie with frosting.
  6. I don’t know.
  7. I’m okay with the unknown.
  8. I’m terrible at making lists.
  9. My best friend is in love with me.
  10. Or, maybe, it’s that I’m in love with my best friend?
  11. I’m concerned about the people who believed so vehemently in the rapture and death the eclipse was “supposed” to bring.
  12. Grand Duchess Anastasia is still alive.
  13. The body they found is a body double.
  14. Anastasia is still the same age as the day she died.
  15. Anastasia must assume the throne.
Denise Krebs

Hope, this is so delightful reading the progression of one line flowing into the next. OMG, I hadn’t heard about the people who “believed so vehemently in the rapture and death the eclipse was “supposed” to bring.” Yikes!

I also love the cookie line. I can relate. Cookies are my downfall when it comes to watching my sugar intact, for sure! In fact, it makes me want to dig in my freezer for the last of the Thin Mints. Loved reading your poem.

Angie

I am feeling “the just world is grossly unjust” and “I don’t know” yes, yes, yes!

Maureen Y Ingram

“The body they found is a body double.” – oh my!!

Leilya Pitre

Hope, thank you for sharing your True/False poem today! The line that resonates with me is “I’m okay with the unknown.” It looks like you have some interest in Anastasia. If she is still alive, she is 123 years old, which may be possible, but it’s not likely. An interesting thought/theory though.

Jennifer Kowaczek

Hope, I like your spin on the prompt.
I’m saving this to explore more at a later date.

MathSciGuy

Denise, thanks for the prompt-your line about the chaos in spilled milk inspired my poem today!

Milk math, baby brain

True or false?
A fresh bottle of warm milk feeds the body & soul
A bottle of milk provides nourishment for…
thirty minutes
one hour
two hours
four hours
eight hours
sixteen hours
That bottle of milk provides nourishment right now.

but it spilled
a little bit
into his mouth
just a sip
When did we secure the lid?
Why are there two bottles?
Which one – that one – is it?

Denise Krebs

Oh, MSG, I love the math milk connections you have made. And the repetition of that bottle and all the trouble it fomented. So interesting!

Rachel S

I love the section about how long a bottle of milk will provide nourishment – anywhere from 30 minutes to 16 hours. I wish babies were more predictable in that regard! This is a perfect picture of the early baby days, where everything revolves around milk!!

Dave Wooley

Denise, I love the interplay of truth and falsehoods that your poem invites us to consider. I love your poem and the insiration poems–Clint Smith is so good!

I probably have some Gatsby overload today as I near the end of a novel unit and it’s got me thinking about canonical texts and the amount of real estate they occupy in our curriculum, so:

A True Survey of American Literature, Falsely Rendered.

Hawthorne’s Scarlet Letter is the great American novel.
Melville’s Moby Dick is the great American novel.
Mark Twain’s The Adventure of Huckleberry Finn is truly the great American novel.
Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby–not a word out of place–is THE great American novel.
Hemingway’s The Sun Also Rises–no, For Whom the Bell Tolls, his best work,
is the great American novel.
Faulkner’s Absalom! Absalom!; his masterpiece, is the great American novel.
Steinbeck, Kerouak, Joseph Heller, Philip Roth, Cormac McCarthy; surely he
wrote the one definitive masterpiece–

the one true representation of this richly wrought,
complex tapestry of the American experience,
the apex of our literary canon,
the great American novel.

Denise Krebs

OH, Dave, nice. I’m seeing some truth falsely rendered in your poem, especially the conclusion. “the one true representation…of this tapestry” You have richly and ironic pointed out what is missing. Your title is spot on. Thank you.

Angie

Hahaha hilarious.

brcrandall

All the evidence one needs for ‘classic literature’ (& who shot out of the canon) is to study the ‘greats.’ Nailed it. “surely he / wrote the one definitive masterpiece.”

Scott M

Dave, I love this! Every line from the title to the list of “acclaimed” authors to the end lines — “the apex of our literary canon, / the great American novel” — is spot-on! This is so so good!

Jennifer Kowaczek

An Introvert’s True or False

  1. I’ve gone skydiving OR
  2. I’ve gone parasailing.
  3. I’ve enjoyed an African safari Or
  4. I’ve held a koala in Sydney Australia.
  5. I’ve read 100 books in one year OR
  6. I’ve gone one year of buying zero books.
  7. I’ve read the same book every year since 2009 OR
  8. I’ve never re-read a book — there are too many new ones to explore for that!

Now, go ahead and take a guess! Which of these adventures has this introvert explored?
©️Jennifer Kowaczek April 2024

Thank you, Denise, for this prompt! What a fun way to spend my test proctoring time.

Katherine Lindsey

I am so curious about your books! I am going to guess that you’ve read 100 books in one year! I have a few friends working on completing that challenge now! I also am going to guess that maybe you’ve reread the same book, and if that true. What book?

Denise Krebs

Jennifer, I love what you did here! From one introvert to another, I’m going to venture a guess: parasailing, Koala holding, 100 books in a year, and you read the same book since 2009. So glad you had an activity during the test proctoring time. I would love to read a poem about each one of your truths, whatever they are!

Angie

Love the way you set this up. I’m guessing skydiving, koala, buying zero books, and same book!

Susan

This was a clever way to tackle this prompt!
My guesses . . .
parasailing
held a koala
a year without buying a book
read the same book every year since 2009

I want to do that now that you mention it (it remains to be seen whether you actually did it). Makes me think of the school teacher who wore the same outfit for picture day for like 40 years.

Leilya Pitre

Jenifer, you had fun compiling this introvert’s list. I would love to know your answers. My guesses are parasailing, koala holding, 100 books, and as much as I would like you to retead one book each year, I think there are too many new ones to explore. 🙂

Susan

Denise . . . this is, at its root, a great poem prompt, but I also appreciate how you gave options.

I can see lots of options for using this in the classroom.

I finally made myself just stop so I could submit. I’m sure I will continue to add

Who Am I?

I wanted the Boilers to win.
The eclipse was one of the most incredible sights I’ve witnessed.
I would love to live in Greenwich Village.
I know I am ready to retire.
I never feel lonely when I am alone.
I feel horribly racist when I can’t distinguish some of my Latino girls. 
Society functioned better when women stayed at home.
I saw Bigfoot in 1984.
I have never once doubted my faith in God.
My favorite place on Earth is my home. 
I don’t have a favorite child.
Guilt and shame are possible to overcome.
In my next life, I want to be a man.
Listening to audiobooks should not be counted as reading.
Illegal immigrants should be deported immediately.
I enjoyed labor and giving birth.
Social media’s benefits outweigh its disadvantages.

~Susan Ahlbrand
9 April 2024

Susan

I just sent this to our four kids as a contest to see who gets the most correctly identified as true or false. Wonder what they will put for “I don’t have a favorite child”? 😂

Denise Krebs

Susan, this is awesome! I love that you sent it to your kids to guess which are true and false. I love the emphatic declarations like “I know…” I never feel…” it makes them maybe more likely to be false, but you never know! So many interesting sentences that would be fun to discuss in class or with a friend, like that last one.

Scott M

Susan, this is great! And I love that you shared this with your “four kids as a contest.” Having read (and continue to thoroughly enjoy) your poetry for the past three or so years, I love that I think I know what the answers are, but I’m willing, though, lol, to accept that I could be mistaken. … except for number 14, there is, indeed, only ONE right answer for that statement….and if you “claim” that you believe that statement is true, well, we’re done here, let’s figuratively shake hands and part ways like civilized people (as opposed to “throwing hands,” as the kids say …. sorry, I didn’t mean for this to get so violent at the end…) 🙂

clayton moon

the false- truth of spiders

Bust down pink bricks, as I chop weeds,
Wrong the rights of the thoughts we read.
Never is always present, as we proceed.
Talent tumbles over agents like sesame seeds.

Round-up the green with pathetic verse,
Due the devil revert-to his curse,
Blacken our rainbows in a poetic hearse,
Humanity crumbles as the profane disburse.

No wheel to spin on millionaire clout.
Creativity dies with standardized doubt.
Prestigeous calligraphy rages silent shouts,
Conformity and spirit slap in writer’s bout.

False hope in a spider’s clinic,
As I speak for the cynics.
All swallow the latest gimmick,
Copying the sages, as they mimic.

The colorful form of a dead donkey,
bring down Woodholly’s conky,
Listen to the hidden Swankies,
as they reveal the want keys.

Maybe there is no false and this is all true,
Maybe you’ll write and reveal you?
Maybe you can break through?
Maybe we will be famously dead too?

Write with an inkless pen,
Confide in imaginary friends,
There’s sour sugar at the end,
now that I have finished, the truth can begin.

  • Boxer
Denise Krebs

Wow, Boxer, isn’t this something? I loved reading it with one of my favorite rhyme schemes of all time. Then those last two verses inviting us into the process are my favorites. Then “now that I have finished, the truth can begin.” makes me go back and read the whole thing again! Loved this.

Heidi Ames

10 Things I Know

  1. You never know when a chance encounter will fill your heart with joy
  2. “Maybe Someday” needs to be NOW
  3. The incessant chatter in my head needs to pipe down
  4. Life is short and long term care solutions are daunting
  5. Sometimes I wish I had a crystal ball…then again…
  6. Poetry is powerful and purposeful
  7. A sunny day brightens my spirit
  8. If you have five people you can count on no matter what you are a lucky person
  9. Gardens of words, gardens of flowers are equally colorful
  10. Create beauty and you will receive beauty
Ashley

Heidi,

Your poem feels like a slam poem! I can hear the emphasis on “NOW” and the poignant pause of the ellipses.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Heidi, I love these ten truths!

“Life is short and long term care solutions are daunting” Isn’t that the truth!
I also smiled and thought of all the beautiful things I’ve read, even just recently, and believe this one too, although, I hadn’t really given it much thought before:
“Gardens of words, gardens of flowers are equally colorful” So beautiful!

Here’s to someday being now!

Mo Daley

Create beauty and you will receive beauty seem like words to live by. Your poem is so relatable!

Katrina Morrison

Heidi, I think my favorite line from your poem is “Sometimes I wish I had a crystal ball…then again…” Then again, “A sunny day brightens my spirit.”

Amber

Denise, what a great way to enter the writing and poetry world today with lists. My lists could easily get out of control…which means I could be sitting on a wealth of poetry here without even knowing it.

Also…seeking feedback…would my line one be which or whom…if I’m the statue? That’s fun in and of itself to explore through writing, I suppose.

This was fun!

I’m Fine

By Amber Harrison
After Dean Young’s “True/False”

  1. I’ve been a golden statue around whom Marigold danced.
  2. It’s easy to be patient – just wait without being frustrated or anxious.
  3. You can sit in the rolling office chair if you want.
  4. Eating two cups of ice at 9:59 am every day reduces stress.
  5. I threatened to kill my sister’s goldfish once, but then it actually died.
  6. I’m as good as Penelope of Ithaca at making tests.
  7. There are knitting notions in my front left jeans pocket.
  8. I’m my own boss in 2024.
  9. I hope they have a very, merry Christmas.
  10. That’s enough perms.
Amber

Whoops…those were supposed to be numbered.

Denise Krebs

I’m Fine
By Amber Harrison
After Dean Young’s “True/False”

  1. I’ve been a golden statue around whom Marigold danced.
  2. It’s easy to be patient – just wait without being frustrated or anxious.
  3. You can sit in the rolling office chair if you want.
  4. Eating two cups of ice at 9:59 am every day reduces stress.
  5. I threatened to kill my sister’s goldfish once, but then it actually died.
  6. I’m as good as Penelope of Ithaca at making tests.
  7. There are knitting notions in my front left jeans pocket.
  8. I’m my own boss in 2024.
  9. I hope they have a very, merry Christmas.
  10. That’s enough perms.

🙂 Oh, Amber, I love this. I love the title too: “I’m Fine” And #4 made me laugh at the impossibility of attempting this each day. #7 is so funny too, and I can’t help but think it might be true. #10, oh my! I really enjoyed reading these all several times, with and without the numbers.

I’m no expert on who/whom. Line 1 sounds right to me. I know who is a subject pronoun and whom is an object, but I’m still not sure. Who will help us know?

Denise Krebs

Oh, funny. I copied and pasted them with the numbers, and it came out the same way as your first one. Oops! Where are those numbers running away to.

Amber

The numbers must be saying, “No, thank you,” today.

Thank you for this prompt. It has provided me a moment to think and problem solve.

Glenda Funk

Hi Amber,
Denise reached out to me about your which/whom question in line 1 of your poem. I have four options for you, all of which are grammatically correct depending on the rhetorical choice you want to make.

Option 1: “I’ve been a golden statue around whom Marigold danced.” In this option you’re personifying the statue. If you want to give it human qualities, leave whom in.

Option 2: “I’ve been a golden statue around which Marigold danced.” This is my least favorite option, although it’s grammatically correct if you’re referring to statue as an object.

Option 3: “I’ve been a golden statue that Marigold danced around.” In my professional opinion this is a preferable construction compared to option 3. That’s simply because I think it sits on the ear in a more natural way.

Option 4: “I’ve been a golden statue Marigold danced around.” In this option the phrasing is more direct and concise. You don’t need that or which.

If I were you, I’d stick w/ your original phrasing or choose Option 4. I hope this helps.

Now about your poem. I love the reference to Penelope. She’s a role model for the delay by test tactic. Your analysis for being patient resonates w/ me. I’m not patient at all. Ditto on the perms. What were we thinking? I see photos and have a yikes moment.

I’m glad Denise alerted me to your poem. Cheers.

Denise Krebs

Thanks, Glenda. What a variety of possibilities!

Susan O

True/False

This morning I jumped out of bed and ran
started to open the door but stopped
I heard a noise 
I rubbed my eyes
the sun startled me with its brightness
you jumped out at me from a dream
I know I was sleeping
my bed was still warm
it was waiting for me.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Susan, this is so poignant with love and longing for your dear one. I love how most lines are active. “I heard a noise” “you jumped out…” This line brings peace to me, somehow: “the sun startled me with its brightness” Showing the new day and hope, I think.

Mo Daley

From your first line I kind of expected a funny poem, because jumping and running are not things I do first thing in the morning. Then I felt a meloncholy lonliness from the dream. Beautiful.

Ashley

True/False

I borrow calm from blue pills and caffeine
I like to try new things from soap making to being an EMT
I enjoy a glass of wine but care not about tannins
I take advice from my counsel of canine companions
i chose to start over in Basic rather than quit
I am terribly jealous of my husband’s quick wit
I cry at powerful songs and Adam Sandler movies
I don’t believe in soul maters, but I love love stories
I woke up fighting during my appendectomy
I rely on the magic powers of local honey
I wish I could be an international spy
Everything on this list is a lie.

Denise Krebs

Oh, my goodness. That last line just made me jump and reread. Now, I don’t know what to think! I love the rich details in each of the lines. Like “tannins” in the wine and “Adam Sandler movies” and “counsel of canine companions.” I could go on about being a spy, local honey…, etc. I would love to hear about all these truths and/or falsehoods over a glass of wine (but I don’t like wine). Thanks for sharing, Ashley!

Ashley

I wish there was a Verse Love conference, so we could all sit together and drink coffee or beverage of choice and visit.

Denise Krebs

Oh, maybe someday! Wouldn’t that be lovely?

Susan

Yes!!!
I feel like people have read some of my deepest thoughts yet I don’t “know” them. And there are people I am eager to know.

Amber

Your list intrigues me. I like the imagery and emotion you bring in…you have captured my curiosity to get to know you more.

Susan O

Really, Ashley? I love your list and want to believe all except waking up during your appendectomy and learning BASIC. I think you made a list of truths and lies. Love to know you enjoy a glass of wine and rely on magic from local honey.

Ashley

Hi Susan,

Everything is true except for the last line. I woke up during my appendectomy because of an anesthesia miscalculation. I was in Basic for the Army when I hurt my knee-they said I could go home or start over. I chose to start over 🙂

Jordan S.

Denise, thank you for this prompt. I loved your truths and falsehoods, especially “There is chaos in spilled milk.”

How to Remember to be a Whole Person in 10 Easy Steps

  1. Open up the dusty boxes stuffed in the attic, forgotten in closets.
  2. Flip through the notebooks, and skim half-written stories.
  3. Fall into fairy-tales again—the classics and the ones we breathed life into with our hopes and dreams.
  4. Thumb through ticket stubs to concerts and musicals, where you danced and sang every word.
  5. Appraise the degrees you earned, but were too lazy to frame and hang. (The Masters encased within a FedEx envelope)
  6. Display the trophies with their proud dancers cast in plastic.
  7. Flip yellow, glass worry beads in your palm, each clack bringing you back to the Plaka.
  8. Carefully rewrap your bridal bouquet in his great-grandmother’s kerchief.
  9. Combine the ultrasound photos and hospital bracelets into one pink box.
  10. Remember there is more to you than just this moment.  
Heidi Ames

I loved this! I frequently flip through old journals and live again…
Your last line resonates…There certainly is more to you than this moment.
Thank you for reminding me.

Denise Krebs

Oh, I love how the artifacts of life jump out here to help you feel more like a whole person. I know we get lost in the busyness of being a teacher and forget all the memories and aspects of our life that make us who we are. I love the many facets of you as a gem of a person you reveal here from writing, reading, music, dancing trophies, trips, education, marriage, childbirth. Oh, yes, your poem makes that last line rich with meaning and truth.

Ashley

Jordan,

Your poem reminds me how important it is to slow down, and I felt seen when I read your lines as if you see the many things most of us forget to notice like “appraise the degrees you earned, but were too lazy to frame and hang.”

Amber

Ohhhh!!!! I really, really enjoy reading this. I needed to remember, thank you for posting here today. My heart is warm.

Margaret Simon

Denise, I love your list of truths and falsehoods. Especially, “That tiny silver sliver in the sky is still full.”

I opened my meditation app “Insight Timer” to see this quote of the day: “If you avoid conflict to keep the peace, you start a war inside yourself.” (Cheryl Richardson) Thus my poem…

The War inside Myself

  1. I’m not good enough.
  2. Pizza has all the ingredients of a meal.
  3. I’m rushing because I cannot manage time.
  4. Time is an illusion, anyway.
  5. If I make a list, I can appear more organized.
  6. Poetry flows when I open the meditation app.
  7. Meditate more often.
  8. You have to justify your feelings
  9. No one is interested in your feelings, anyway.
  10. Calm down; You’ve got this!
Christine Baldiga

Margaret, “no one is interested in your feelings, anyway” struck a chord with me and left me feeling quite heavy and sad. I’ve heard these words said to me and have been left feeling lonely and even angry. Thank you for verbalizing this falsehood

Rita DiCarne

Margaret,
That pesky war within is always stealing our attention. I agree – pizza is a meal! I try hard not to justify my feelings, but old habits are hard to break.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Margaret, what a great quote to inspire this today. I like the war progressing from “I’m not good enough” to “Calm down; You’ve got this!” With everything else in between so carefully going from one thing to the next with, for instance, time meditation, and feelings provoking the next lines. You have captured that war inside that we so often wage. Thanks for sharing this positive way to battle.

Amber

Oh man! That pizza line…I think about that far too often than a human probably needs to think about it. Ha! And I like the last line…is that truth or is that a lie. Oh, how the beholders know.

Susan

So many truths!
I love

If I make a list, I can appear more organized.

brcrandall

Denise, thank you for the many models and ideas to get a morning poem onto the page. I’m most struck by “They day you eat it your eyes will open.” Such an intriguing line. I appreciate your poetic leadership this Tuesday!

%$#@ List
b.r. crandall

First, it’s not you…
institutions are built on hypocrisy
and you just work there,
complicity complacent
& complacently complicit.

Perhaps the 70 year-old
driving 40 on I-95, 
texting her grandson
while smoking a joint
& applying lipliner.
is my road rage.

I know…I know…I know.
we’re storied beings,
so branding fabrications 
of grandiose morality
with historical white sheets 
is one way to cover-up the past 
(the present) in missionary work.

And I suppose forks & 
dishes have learned to sliver
their way into the sink after
after studying centipedes
(the same for those clean pants
thrown back in the laundry).

Open door policies are good,
but we see through the glass
that you never come in.
Leadership is fresh air, indeed,
and offices recycle stale traditions.
Chinese lantern flies are everywhere.

Like I said, it’s not you.
It’s the business.
It’s the money
It’s the pitch
on an elevator
between heaven
and hell.

Glenda Funk

Bryan,
OMG! I love everything about your poem today. I could copy the entire thing and still find more to admire here. The title hooked me in. I’m in a mood, so even hinting at cultural taboos is all I need to be interested. Yes, “institutions are built on hypocrisy.” Love the wordplay in “complicity complacent
& complacently complicit.” Here is an ironic truth:
“Open door policies are good,
but we see through the glass
that you never come in.
The parallel phrasing in the last verse reinforces the idea that the system just keeps going and replicating itself. Powerful poem. Thank you.

Stacey Joy

My Bryan! So much to love here!

but we see through the glass

that you never come in.

and on and on! I am in awe.

Denise Krebs

Bryan, how you have thrown flames of truth and justice. Here is a poem I’m so glad you wrote today. This section gave me such pause. Oh, that we could uncover the past and not be afraid of the repercussions. Thank you for this beauty today.

so branding fabrications 

of grandiose morality

with historical white sheets 

is one way to cover-up the past 

(the present) in missionary work.

Amber

That last stanza is FIRE!!!!! Such a great read, “Perhaps the 70 year old…is my road rage” makes me chuckle in a way that hopefully isn’t belittling. Sometimes it’s cute when people get mad.

I’m glad I came to this space with you today. Thank you for sharing.

Ashley

Bryan,

This is incredibly powerful, and as someone still beginning the journey into academia, I find your candor refreshing and humbling all at once. The lines “Leadership is fresh air, indeed/ and offices recycle stale traditions” reminds me of how important it is for people and organizations to continue to grow and question what is, what always has been, and what needs to be.

Dave Wooley

Bryan,

That 3rd stanza has got A LOT going on. The past (present), missionary work, white sheets, branding fabrications. Lots to think about as you throw these concepts into the cauldron.

Susan

Bryan,
This is phenomenal! So though-provoking. I could read it over and over. And, I just might.

Susan

dang . . . thought-provoking

Shaun

Bryan,
Wow! If I had a nickel for every dead-end phone conversation with some “institutional” lackey, and wished I had your poem in front of me. Wonderful visual and aural images – I had to read lines like “dishes have learned to sliver their way into the sink after studying centipedes” aloud to relish in the “essyness of it”! Great job!

Leilya Pitre

Bryan, if the list prompt can result in this poem, then I can’t even imaging a more focused themed task. You pointed out some principal fallacies of our society: hypocricy and “stale traditions.” It seems that “round and round we go.” I live the entire poem, but the second stanza is such an honest account of affairs:
branding fabrications 
of grandiose morality
with historical white sheets 
is one way to cover-up the past 
(the present) in missionary work.”
Thank you for stripping sugar coating from today’s reality!

Scott M

Bryan, I love this! I find myself channeling this “borderline seething” persona, lol, often! The “complicity complacent / & complacently complicit” does it for me! That makes me so crazy…look, I know you’re doing your job “manning the phones” but can you at least see this “from my side,” from the customer’s side, and, no, I know you’re not “Kevin from Texas” on the line “here to help me!” Ugh. I don’t begrudge you a job, people gotta eat, I’m ok with that, just, please, please, don’t lie to me, don’t act like this is not a problem that other people are having, too…. Sorry for the tangent, clearly I’m working through some things here, lol. Now, your end image? Perfect! “Like I said, it’s not you. / It’s the business. / It’s the money / It’s the pitch / on an elevator / between heaven / and hell.”

Christine Baldiga

Denise, what a fun prompt and surprisingly challenging for me to write. For some reason this line jumped out for me: There is chaos in spilled milk! The image these words created in my mind were both humorous and messy! Thank you.
I was fortunate to view the w loose in its totality yesterday so while it’s etched in my mind I wrote this:

Eclipse Truths?

I booked my eclipse lodging two years ago
This was my first time viewing a total eclipse
I consider myself an expert on all things solar
Eclipses cause catastrophes across the globe
I cried when I saw the eclipse’s diamond ring
Traveling to the eclipse was a traffic nightmare that I don’t ever want to repeat
I’ve seen one eclipse and now strive to be an umbraphile

Dave Wooley

…looking up “umbraphile”…Ah!
Very cool and timely poem, Christine! And I’m guessing line 6 is a solid truth!

Denise Krebs

Christine, love this! Thank you for sharing, and for the question mark in the title, as there are some that may not be true. Fascinating because you still teach us about the eclipse–for instance someone “booked their lodging two years ago” if you didn’t. I love that idea of the “diamond ring.” It’s the first I’ve seen it called that, so I don’t know if you made it up or not but it is such a lovely image and makes me think I would cry if I saw it. Thanks for the vocabulary lesson too with umbraphile. I think I might remember that because umbrella also has the base word of umbr- meaning shadow.

Christine Baldiga

Denise – Great connection to umbrella as umbraphile technically means shadow chaser!
I’ve since added a line since this draft: the world was united when viewing this phenomenon. The afterglow from all was earth shattering!

Denise Krebs

I love it! “the world was united” and “The afterglow…shattering”

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Denise, when I awoke this morning and glanced out the window, I saw frisky robins and wrens flying and darting around the blossoming trees. Then, I recalled a lesson from Sunday School and decided to pull together a poem for your list poem prompt. It was not a close fit, but since VERSELOVE gives us the option, I decided to share it here.

Giving the Finger? No!

Fingers flailing on just one hand,
Can feature what is special to us,
Pointing out who and what are important:

Family and Friends
Faculty and *Fenestra
And, of course, our Faith.

Based on the names given to each of the fingers,
Which word on your list could go with each one?
Will you tell us why? Oh, come on. Just give it a try.

And don’t “flip the bird” like some in the herd.
Stay. Don’t run. This could be lots of fun.

*Fenestra is Latin for “window”. I see this as a windows-and-mirror-type poem.

FIVE FINGER NAMES.png
Margaret Simon

Such fun, Anna, a prompt from a prompt. Makes me want to make handprints and write poems about them. Thanks for the new word fenestra.

Denise Krebs

Anna, what a fun prompt! A poem that invites response. I’m going to think about what each finger represents. I love the alliteration in family, friends, faculty, fenestra and faith fingers. Fenestra is a new word for me too. It reminds me of that finger for all those outside the window that we can have empathy for. Clever poem.

Rita DiCarne

Denise,
Thanks for this prompt and mentor texts. These poets are both new to me. My poem is a list of random thoughts, but as I look over my list, I think I can use these as jumping-off lines for another poem or essay.

True/False

  1. Phone addictions are real.
  2. Baseball is America’s game.
  3. Sleep is overrated.
  4. Four grandchildren feed my soul.
  5. Teachers get the summer “off.”
  6. Middle school students are my life.
  7. The day you stop learning is the day you stop living.
  8. Writing is easy like Sunday morning.
  9. Mystery makes life interesting.
  10. Autumn is my favorite season.
  11. Music is an elixir.
  12. There is no tired like teacher tired.
Margaret Simon

I am with you on so many of these lines. “no tired like teacher tired” is a truth I battle every day. And I have 4 grandchildren, too, who keep me entertained and busy. What a great list!

Denise Krebs

Rita, I love that these random thoughts of true/false are going to be jumping off points for your writing. What a great idea. Some beautiful thoughts are here: The grandchildren who “feed my soul” “Mystery makes life interesting” and your take on Lionel Ritchie’s great lyric “Writing is easy like Sunday morning.” Hmmm…true or false? But it’s beautiful. And there is one truth I’m sure of in that last line! Oh, I believe it.

opager.judi@gmail.com

They Used to Call It the Honeymooners Disease
(True or False Form)

I begin this with a Truth:
I’m pissed because I have a major UTI, and
probably have had it for a few months!
It was discovered quite by accident
when my daughter remarked, “Mom, you’re acting weird” and called 911.

True or False:
When you are a younger woman,
with a common UTI
it will sound an unmistakable alarm with pain
when peeing, unrelenting and unbearable.

True or False:
When you are an older woman,
there will be no pain to alert you,
and your main symptom will
be confusion, anxiety, imbalance, or even delirium

True or False:
When you are a younger woman,
a UTI will cause your pee to be
stinky and maybe cloudy.

True or False:
When you are an older woman,
that may not happen at all!

True or False:
Regardless of age, a UTI
does not always cause fever.

True or False:
Left untreated, a UTI’s bacteria will travel
from your bladder to your kidneys,
and it will finally enter your blood stream.
You will become septic and probably will die.

True or False:
250,000 Americans die from UTI/Sepsis every year!

So, when was the medical community
going to give us updates
on the new and completely different symptoms
for this very common condition
most people suffer from
particularly as they age,
and tell the truth about UTIs:
When UTIs become silent they are deadly!

Judi Opager
April 9, 2024

Gayle Sands

Judi–This should be made into a TV commercial! Although I have not had a UTI in some years, whenever my mother grew unusually confused, we would immediately have her urine checked–and it was always a UTI. Your true-false is completely on-point!

Christine Baldiga

My mom taught me these truths and it was scary! Thanks for bringing these truths to light.

Margaret Simon

This is not only poetry, it is information we all need, especially as our mothers age. My mother has Alzheimer’s, so we have to explain to caregivers to test her urine when she is more confused, but what does that look like when every day there is more confusion?

Denise Krebs

Oh, my goodness! Thank you for sharing this. What a great public service announcement. Even if there is any false in it, the truths rise to the top and show the importance of this health care issue. I’m glad your daughter was there to call 911! Yikes!

Rachel S

Ugh I’m sorry! Not fun. My neighbor – a male – went septic from an unnoticed uti (he was treated at the hospital & is fine now), so it’s not just females! I had no idea. I agree we need to have better medical information readily available!!

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Judi, what a clever and timely way to show statistics on UTIs. They are SO dangerous – one of my daughters has had a scary experience with this, and I’m so glad you are okay. When I refill my water cup at work, one particular coworker always says, “your organs are thanking you.” I think about your words and think about her words and it makes me want to drink nothing but water and to double, triple, quadruple down. Thank you for this!

Heather Morris

Wow! I am so glad I read your poem. Informative and powerful.

anita ferreri

Denise, this is a powerful format that certainly derailed (in a positive way) my plans for the hour and has left me thinking about the truths, the half truths, the partial truths and the outright falsehoods among us….

I am confident “things” will work out the way they are “supposed to be.”
I am worried about the state of our nation.
I am concerned about lies that become truths.
I am a great mother and even better grandmother!
I am thrilled to visit the dentist.
I am excited for a colonoscopy
I am worried about our world.

Rita DiCarne

Anita, I feel your list could be my list especially, the first line. I use it a lot, but what does it mean anyway?

Christine Baldiga

I love the juxtaposition of the colonoscopy and the world – both $@#%y. In reality and joking aside it makes me so sad

Dave Wooley

Anita, I love how you’ve put these personal and universal true/false in conversation. Your 3rd line about lies that become truths really resonates.

Denise Krebs

Anita, I’m glad you had a good diversion this morning! I feel I can relate to your poem, as they bring out for me some of my truths, half truths, and outright falsehoods. Well done. I like the way you use “thrilled” and “excited” and “confident” to maybe point to what is more nuanced. It reminds me of tricks learned to pass T/F tests. Amen to line 2. I can’t help but think that might be true for everyone these days.

Barbara Edler

Anita, Well, I can definitely surmise that your 5th and 6th lines might be a stretch. I could definitely relate to your poems as you voice some of my own fears. I especially enjoyed “I am concerned about lies that become truths.” I also really appreciated your comment to Denise!

Scott M

True/False Poem

  1. This is a poem.
  2. We will, truly, finally, unequivocally, learn, “Who let the dogs out?”
  3. This is not a poem.
  4. Poems are people.
  5. Poems are things.
  6. Poems are states-of-being.
  7. A poem is a poem is a poem is a poem.
  8. A rose is not.
  9. Words are things, physical and figurative, literal and symbolic “things.”
  10. Words are not.
  11. Words are not roses.
  12. Petals are not letters.
  13. Letters are not petals, yet words can bloom.
  14. Words can flower.
  15. And die.

_________________________________________________________

Thank you, Denise, for this fun prompt and for introducing me to these “True/False” poems!  Dean Young was new to me (and so was Clint Smith’s list poem), and, I agree (because your line was obviously FALSE) you can’t have “too much storage space”! 

Dave Wooley

Scott, I still don’t know who let the dogs out! So, false? I do love a lot of these lines (“Letters are not petals, yet words can bloom”-Wow!) and I like how the True/False construction invites the audience into the poem and keeps us a bit off balance.

Denise Krebs

Scott, I love how you have fun with things! I mean poems. And words and format and magic. I’m just rereading the last section about words and wondering if I feel poignant about them just because you say words can die. Thank you for being a mentor to us here with your fun take on all the prompts!

Mo Daley

Scott, this would be a great poem to share with students at the beginning of the year as an introduction to poetry. It feels to me like you’re pushing the boundaries so much here, which is what we want our students to do, isn’t it? Also, it was my husband. He let the dogs out.

Allison Laura Berryhill

Your poem knocked me on the forehead.
“This is a poem” is the best line. Here is my T/F response:

This is a poem.
This. Is. A. Poem.
thisisapoem
THIS IS A POEM.
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WOWilkinson
  1. Kids come to school to learn.
  2. Kids come to school to socialize.
  3. Kids come to school to cause trouble.
  4. Kids come to school to graduate.
  5. Kids come to school to see their teachers.
  6. Kids come to school to torment their teachers.
  7. Kids come to school late.
  8. kids come to school on time.
  9. Kids come to school hungry.
  10. Kids come to school curious.
  11. Kids come to school angry.
  12. Kids come to school relieved.
  13. Kids come to school sleepy.
  14. Kids come to school excited.
  15. Kids come to school afraid.
  16. Kids come to school hopeful.
  17. Kids come to school lonely.
  18. Kids come to school for the food.
  19. Kids come to school for the shame.
  20. Kids come to school for the relationships.
  21. Kids come to school for the sarcasm.
  22. Kids come to school for the books.
  23. Kids come to school for the bullying.
  24. Kids come to school for the WiFi.
  25. Kids come to school as the best people they can be at the moment.
Rita DiCarne

What a list! You have made me think about the students who sit in front of me each day and wondering what each of them comes to school for. I love the last line! Isn’t that all any of us can be?

Gayle Sands

All of the above are true/false–but that last one more than anything else, is truth! (And the same is true for us as teachers…)

Denise Krebs

Eric, wow. What a great topic for a poem like this. For every child, they would have different truths and falsehoods. Reading “Kids come to school…” so many times really packed a punch, and then that last line. Masterful. Thank you for sharing. I hope you can find a place to share this with a larger group, even just your staff at school. Beautiful.

Heidi Ames

Oh how true! They all come for different reasons, or only because required, but we are there for all of them being the best people WE can be at the moment.

Kevin

Each line could be a title of an auxiliary poem.
Kevin

Susan

This is so brilliant! You provide so much food for thought, and that culminating line . . . wow!

Judith L Opager

Relevantly observed burnt and brilliantly stated, I’m going to make a copy of it for my office. I just love your poem

Heather Morris

Wow! What a list. The last line is the most important thing for us all to remember.

Leilya Pitre

Is there an “All of the Above” option here? I think I would choose it. I’d like to eliminate a couple, especially “for the bullying” and “for shame” A sad reality though is that these things happen. Thank you for thoughtfully compiling this list!

WOWilkinson

Thank you for all the kind comments. Y’all are too nice.

Andrew H.

I absolutely LOVED your poem. The transition from the simple beginning, its emotional middle, and its complicated end was fantastic! Also, the true/false nature of this poem is very interesting as it can change depending on the school, state, or country.

Glenda Funk

Denise,
Thanks for giving us two options today. I love Clint Smith’s poetry. Have you read his other collection, Above Ground? I enjoyed trying to solve the puzzle in your true/false poem.

How to Piss Off the Patriarchy on November 5, 2024

March
Wear a pink pussy hat & carry a sign
Call out their mansplaining
Tell them Barbie is your favorite movie
Block their asses 
Laugh at the man-babies like Orangey 
Delete Xitter 
Scroll past their bullshit & never enable them
Just say NO to dating MAGAts
Listen to your feminist father who said, 
Never put up with crap from men &
Never be financially dependent on a man
Be a women’s rights advocate riding a blue 🌊 
Vote 

Glenda Funk
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Denise Krebs

Glenda, you are speaking out and giving us a great checklist. Hear, hear! I’m going to delete Xitter now. I like the two short words beginning and ending your poem March-Vote, with so much detailed advocacy in between. Thank you. I hope many listen!

Denise Krebs

I forgot to mention, I haven’t read his latest. Since I hadn’t read any of his poetry, I recently bought his first poetry book first.

Barbara Edler

Your poem is on fire! I can hear your voice and your Canva image says more than a 100 words. I absolutely adore your father’s advice. I wished I had had a father say the same thing to me. Fantastic job of including the blue wave image and your last word is incredibly important so I’m glad you had it end your poem on a line all by itself. Your poem is compelling. Rock on!

Shaun

Glenda!
So much truth and power in your words today! The direct address to the reader drew me in, grabbed my collar, and told me what’s what! The father’s voice is so bold and honest! Thanks for sharing!

Stefani B

Denise, thank you for these prompts. I love the shift of meaning in Smith’s poem, what a great exemplar. My favorite line in your poem is the chaos around spilled milk:)

True or False? Turn it up!

I don’t see the shade
I wear my sunglasses at night
I have a feeling I belong
I feel like I am drowning
I have someone who needs me
I am just a girl
I feel like a woman
I believe I can fly
I wanna dance with somebody
I feel good

Glenda Funk

Stefani,
I see you *don’t stop believing* in the power of song and poetry. Love the structure of your poem. It’s super clever and fun. Each line evokes a memory. Now I want to write a found lyric poem. I hope some teachers borrow this idea. Very cool.

Denise Krebs

Oh, my goodness. Your title and Glenda’s comment helped me understand more of this beauty, and arranged just so for Stefani. I love the “I am just a girl” next to “I feel like a woman.” I’m singing through some lines! Lovely cento poem.

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

I’m hooked on a feeling this lyric poem will take off! I believe that students would be ultra-engaged in writing these as they mash up lyrics. This is neat, Stefani! I like what you have done with the lyrics.

Kevin

Perfect use of song titles, Stefani

Heather Morris

Your poem is awesome and has me singing in my head.

Rachel Lee

True or False

1). At any given time, I’m not totally sure what Tapas are.
2). I don’t think it’s rude to not talk if you have nothing to say regardless of the situation 
3). I like mushrooms 
4). The smell of dog food makes me sick 
5). I’m related to Harper Lee 
6). A thunderstorm on Saturday morning is the absolute best 
7). I didn’t know you can get a yeast infection from taking Amoxicillin 
8). Heights are a thrill 
9). Some days, I hate everything 
10). Tulips are my favorite

Stefani B

Rachel, your addition of “at any given moment” adds so much to meaning and wit of your poem. Thank you for sharing today.

Christine Baldiga

I really hope tulips are your favorite – they certainly make me smile. Love your poem

Denise Krebs

Rachel, I am cracking up here because it’s like we are learning about you, but not. The list is so diverse. These are so funny and I just want to sit and have a cup of coffee (I hate coffee) with you while we talk about the truth and false ones. Like Stefani said, words like “at any given moment”, “some days”, “I don’t think,” “I didn’t know” just add to the fun and effectiveness of your list.

Fran Haley

Oh my goodness – how many of these can I agree with-? You make me laugh right off the bat with uncertainty about Tapas and then I am pursing my lips and nodding my head with rudeness not being talking if you have nothing to say. TRUE for me! And, something tells me heights are not a thrill for you, perhaps?? This is so fun to read and ponder!

Kim Johnson

Denise, I needed this today! Each day’s prompt meets a deep need, and yours today is perfect. I’m still all up in the feels of my brother’s wedding and how wonderful it was, so this gave me the opportunity to let some favorite moments rise to the top and linger. Your poem #1 needs a sister to stand beside you in solidarity, and I’m your agreement sis. I look in the mirror and wonder who the old lady is, then go play at the park with grandkids and eat ice cream. #7 is the one I want the t-shirt to say. AMEN and AMEN and AMEN! Thank you for hosting us today- I love all the options and the empowerment and accessibility you bring to writing poetry.

Top Ten Favorite Wedding Moments

  1. The smiles on my brother and his bride’s faces, so full of happiness and love!
  2. Meeting my brother’s new family and feeling both sides merge into one big family. 
  3. Getting a new sister – I love her so much!
  4. Placing flowers on the altar in memory of our mothers.
  5. Seeing the shoes of my son and husband and feeling them lift me up when I fell because (see #1 of Denise Kreb’s poem – I overshot the runway, but I’m okay).
  6. Watching our dads dance – one with a cane, one with bionic knees, but they haven’t lost their groove.
  7. Watching my brother watch his bride come down the aisle.
  8. Spending time with family, including 5 of our 6 grandchildren.
  9. Figuring out how to win the dinner bill argument with my son every time by reminding him I hold nearly one million shares of Shiba Inu (only worth .00002 per share for a total value of $26.00, but hey – it worked).
  10. Playing and having a picnic in the parks and hearing my 5 year old grandson’s response when I tried to tell him my ice cream was mashed potatoes and he took the folded arm stance and firmly argued, “that’s impossible!” (He got ice cream).
Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Kim, family is at the core of every line here, in the uplifting, in the love, in the small details of grooving with bionic knees and canes (not so small to them, I’m sure), to the folded arm stance of believing in what you know is true. And therein lies the truth to the best of life. Your poem offers us that best. Love the celebration of life!

Stefani B

Kim, I love how we all use current moments of our lives to share, connect, and write. I love my sister-in-law so much too…the families we find and create throughout our lives are hard to explain. Thank you for sharing with us today.

opager.judi@gmail.com

Kim, you’ve captured intimate family moments in such a delightful way (as usual). I always love when a poem paints a picture on a canvas in my head as I read and yours certainly did! “Watching our dads dance – one with a cane, one with bionic knees, but they haven’t lost their groove”. A joy reading it.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Kim, how lucky we are to get to go to the wedding through your sweet reminiscences. I’m glad you went here today, for we get to be witnesses of this delightful family celebration. So happy for your brother and his new bride. That fall, as one of your top ten favorite moments speaks volumes of you and your graciousness. I’m so glad you didn’t get hurt.

Barbara Edler

Kim, what a delightful poem. I love the honoring of your mothers and the fun it must have been watching the fathers’ dance. Your final anecdote about mashed potatoes instead of ice cream is especially dear. Lovely poem! I’m so glad you were able to cherish these memories through this poem.

Fran Haley

Marvelous, Kim – I am applauding every celebratory line and moment! I know your heart must be overflowing with joy. I recall reading of your brother and his future bride awhile back, how exciting and hopeful that time was – and now I am just so happy for you all. I love the dinner bill argument so much and that grandson and the ice cream interaction is the cherry on top of the perfection here – oh how I can see my granddaughters in that stance! Yes – let them let us all, eat ice cream – life is short, let us LIVE IT!

Jennifer Guyor-Jowett

Denise, someone who has traveled as much as you have would recognize the truth in having too much storage space. Our last house certainly did and stuff just kept accumulating. I absolutely love line 10 and 6 has me pondering over possibilities.

True/False Philosophy Test (1923)

The first question on this test, 
Blue eyes are newer to the human race than pottery, 
had me flummoxed
(suddenly, I couldn’t get my one True Love, 
and his darn blue eyes, out of my mind long enough to focus)
After several False Starts, 
(I had been a True Believer in my abilities),
I read the second question
Cows kill more people each year than sharks 
(what was this teacher thinking)
And I recognized my dreams of success might never Come True 
(though I’d been promised they would since 1819)
Anxiety began to shriek like a 1578 False Alarm in my head
I realized my confidence was a False Reality
My True Colors had shown through, 
and despite the constancy of the color, 
I was no longer a True Blue believer in myself.
(This is all a True Story)

Kim Johnson

Jennifer, I got stuck on the second line for awhile trying to think too much. I can see how you got to these lines from that test:
Anxiety began to shriek like a 1578 False Alarm in my head
I realized my confidence was a False Reality

This is a beautiful cerebral exercise for this morning – – I’m still thinking about these things and how you worked in that last line to be so powerful – – so compelling!

Rachel Lee

Snap**Anxiety began to shriek like a 1578 False Alarm in my head**Snaps!

Stefani B

Jennifer, I appreciate the self-dialogue you’ve set here, it adds so much to this poem. I was laughing about the cows;) Thank you for sharing today.

WOWilkinson

I really like the asides in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Glenda Funk

Jennifer,
You and Stefani are on the same wavelength—sort of—today. Love the way you found inspiration in Denise’s poem and in songs. Aren’t we all girls who wanna have fun? It’s certainly hard these days given all men (and some women) want to take from us. Lots of enablers out there. And that vow killing detail is something. Those critters are dangerous. Anyway, I love what you did in its totality today, and “that”s a true story.”

opager.judi@gmail.com

Wow, Jennifer, what an introspective poem you’ve shared with us. I loved the line “And I recognize my dreams of success might never Come True (though I’d been promised they would since 1819) What a talented poetess you are!

Denise Krebs

Jennifer, I have had the pleasure of observing you in your early morning poetry writing vigilant focus (Columbus 2023). How can one sit with her computer and mine such magic!? Everything I read makes me wonder. I love all the capitalized True and False idioms. The last line just makes this all the better.

Fran Haley

Jennifer – your poem is as enthralling as it is haunting…it feels old, with those capitals, which are True and False code (plus some modern music, I think…). Mostly what captivates me is the very real sense of disillusionment that emanates from this poem, that is it a test and the test-taker has lost confidence. These interweavings are incredibly artistic – you amaze me!

Fran Haley

Denise, I LOVE this prompt, the mentor texts, and, above all, your poem. I hear the echoes of Scriptures throughout, in addition to astute observations of modern times (the computer in our pockets rules the day…). It is a stunning poem. I want to linger on it awhile, and I will, again and again. Thank you for this. Here’s my little bit of working draft, so far…

True/False

1.  I am much older than I appear.
2.  Green is the color of ordinary time.
3.  Angels can sing.
4.  Stars can sing.
5.  Trees can sing.
6.  Just because it’s myth doesn’t mean it isn’t true.
7.  There’s a reason I use seven asterisks for section breaks.
8.  A seahorse holds the reins of your memory and emotions.
9.  Salt water heals all.
10. Blood is thicker than water.
11. Blood cries.
12. I will live to see another solar eclipse.

Kim Johnson

Fran, I’m loving it all, particularly #1-12. I’m curious about the seven asterisks, and they’re on #7 too, and I love that green is the color of ordinary time – – trees do indeed sing, too, and I will be listening for the stars and angels. What a beautiful chorus!

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Fran, I’m finding myself looking for the truth in everyone’s poems today, and finding that not only do I want to believe (seahorses and memory) but also that I do, because not only do angels indeed sing, stars do as well (what a beautiful and AMAZING thought).

Linda M.

Wow…which line is my favorite? So many great lines…and the use of repetition with the word, “sings” is fantastic. “I will live to see another solar eclipse” is a great ending…leaves the reader satisfied and wondering at the same time.

Rachel Lee

Totally – Amen to “Just because it’s myth doesn’t mean it isn’t true.” Love that.

Glenda Funk

Fran,
Two lines stand out for me: “Just because it’s myth doesn’t mean it isn’t true.” Isn’t this the power of poetry, of all imaginative literature. Your line reminds me of Tim O’Brien’s “Hiw to Tell a True War Story” from The Things They Carried.” Now I want to pull from other texts and create a true/false poem, The second line I love is “Blood cries.” I believe this and believe it happens in the heart, and we can feel it. I certainly have this month. This is such a touching poem for me.

opager.judi@gmail.com

Fran, you went down (and took me with) so many ‘rabbit holes’ with your poem! I loved it. Each line could be a separate poetry prompt!

Denise Krebs

Fran, oh, my heart, this is so beautiful. When I read it the first time, I thought everything was true because of your poetic writing (Kevin’s poem might be influencing me). Then I looked back in wonder. I too am awed by the references to your faith and Scripture. Beautiful.

Linda Mitchell

How to Save the World from Drowning

Lie on your belly and reach out to the World
If you cannot reach the World,
Find a stick, toy, oar, broom, tee-shirt, anything to extend your reach
Throw a flotation device to the World
Stay calm
If you must go into the water row or paddle to the World and repeat the above directions
If you must swim to the World, take a flotation device with you
A panicked World is unpredictably strong and could pull you under
Approach the World from behind
Wrap your arms around the world and place the World on the flotation device
Keep the World’s face above water as you kick toward shore

Fran Haley

Linda, there’s so much love in every poignant, metaphorical line. The quote “all for one and one for all’ returns to mind…for, with the World, are we not all in the same boat? Or, in this case, capsized? I can see your hand extended…perhaps, as Kevin wrote, poetry is the flotation device…

Kim Johnson

Linda, I love that right in the middle of it all, two words prevail: stay calm. This is a beautiful poem and could be the preface to a novel where each line shows a chapter name. What a lovely metaphor!

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Oh, my, Gosh, Linda! This is incredible, and I so, so wish I had written it but am ever-so-glad you did. It definitely feels as if we are all drowning while drowning the world simultaneously, making it hard to stay calm (those two words placed within the space of much heavier lines provide a moment of respite, much needed).

Rachel Lee

The world certainly needs a flotation device – great image.

opager.judi@gmail.com

Linda, you’ve told a remarkable story and like a truly gifted artist, you painted a canvas in my mind. I enjoyed this poem, “Keep the World’s face above water as you kick toward shore.” Brilliant@

Denise Krebs

Linda, Linda, I love all the interpretations I was making of the personified World in your poem. I noticed, like Kim, the power of that short line in the middle. “Stay Calm” but I hope we can do the others too. Thank you for giving a challenge this morning.

Heidi Ames

Wow! Very powerful poem here. I loved the last 2 lines–the world DOES need a flotation device right about now and we’re all just kicking to make it to shore.

Kevin

If the rest of what you read
from this point on, is true,
then this is probably false:

Poetry might yet save the world
Poetry might save the reader
Poetry might save the writer
Poetry might yet save ourselves
Poetry might just be scattered words,
snippets heard

Notice the hedging –
it’s the ink-line of poets
threading the line,
damn near every single time

Kevin

Kathrine

might, might, might — your “hedging” resonates and gets me thinking about what line we’re threading when we might in our writing.

Linda Mitchell

“it’s the ink-line of poets” What a fascinating volta.

Fran Haley

“Might” be right. In this sense…not in all. Beautifully written, Kevin.

Kim Johnson

I love a Tuesday morning last line like that. But that first stanza, that one got my head spinning into the twist of how things might be or are or aren’t, in some way, shape, or form.

opager.judi@gmail.com

Kevin, I love your poems – it’s always as if I’m just talking to you! Your ending; “Notice the hedging – it’s the ink-line of poets threading the line damn near every single time” I loved it!

Kevin

Thank you for taking time to read and respond. Much appreciated (to everyone else here, too)
Kevin

Denise Krebs

Kevin, how do you do this depth in the wee hours of morning? “Poetry might…” I love the true/false/might/hedging-ness sprinkled in that makes it true. I’m going to come back and read this some more!

Kevin

Must be something in my morning coffee … and great prompts!
Kevin

Shaun

Kevin!
Great poem today! I noticed the “hedging” and feel myself “threading the line” while trying to find the word combinations that just “might” have the power to save something! If anything, my own sanity! Thanks for sharing!

Kim

Hi Kevin, I so love reading your words when I wake up in the morning, even knowing that I won’t get to writing until late in the day. Maybe I’m not a poet–I do am certain that poetry will save the reader and the writer and hopeful that it will save the world. I know it’s scattered words, but that’s the beauty of it all!