Students read with sticky notes during our reading workshop, noting new words, aha moments, big questions, parts that moved them to feel/react, and just parts they wanted to discuss in groups.When they met in groups, they used their sticky notes, and I gave them a guide related to the standards I wanted to assess:
- Talk about anything you wish from your sticky notes.
- Write four sentences that capture the first half of your book. Negotiate this together.
- Pull out a few words you noted and talk about what they mean for the part you are reading but also in regards to the book’s subjects.
- Identify supporting characters and talk about why the author included them in the story. What is their purpose?
- Identify subjects the book is exploring and talk about the themes or the author’s message he/she is trying to communicate to readers at this point in the book’s plot.
Three Boys Read and Discuss Broken Memory
One group of boys, Daniel, David, and Johnny, read Broken Memory: A Story of Rwanda by Elisabeth Combres. At the age of five, Emma was hiding behind a chair as her mother was murdered. After the murderers leave, Emma’s mom says, “You must not die, Emma!” Emma wanders out of her town, and an old Hutu woman takes her in, hides her, and cares for her even after the war ends. About eight years later, when Rwanda’s establishes gacaca courts to allow victims to face the perpetrators, Emma’s nightmares worsen. She befriends Ndoli, a torture victim who is re-traumatized with each year’s commemoration of the genocide, and together they begin to heal with the help of an old man helping child survivors. Broken Memory focuses on how Rwanda lives with the trauma of genocide with flashbacks to the 1994 genocide, which are treated with sensitivity (i.e., not overly graphic).
Here is a transcript of a twenty-minute discussion about the first half of Broken Memory among Daniel, David, and Johnny. You can hear more here.
Negotiating Summary and Sequence
Daniel: First, we have to write four sentences that summarize the first half of the book.
Johnny: Life is hard, especially when you’re a little kid.
Daniel: No, we’re not going to do anything about the theme yet. Just summarize. The first part of the book is during the war. Emma witnesses the death of her mom.
Johnny: No, she doesn’t.
Daniel: Did she hear the death?
Johnny: Yes.
Daniel: Then, she witnessed it.
David: No. No. She covered her ears. She saw her mom’s dead body.
Daniel: She heard the men shout. She heard her mom’s suffering.
David: Okay, so we can say Emma “heard” her mom die. Okay, second sentence. She ran away to a nearby village.
Johnny: You know what’s funny? Emma’s name is “normal,” but the other characters like Ndoli are…
Daniel: Then, Emma finds an old lady.Muke.Mukechris. Let me see. (Looking into the text.) Where does it say? Okay, so Emma finds Mukecuru and lives with her.
David: Till the war’s over.
Daniel: Also, Mukchris (sic) is a Hutu.
Johnny: No, she’s the other one.
Daniel: No, Emma’s a Tutsi.
Johnny: Oh, yeah.
Daniel: And right now the war is between the Hutus and Tutsis.
David: What’s the third most important thing? Um, Emma discovered the boy, Ndoli.
Johnny: Wait, shouldn’t we write about how her mother said what she wanted before she died?
David: Yea, keep on living.
Daniel: Right. Let’s add that here. Mom told Emma not to die.
David: What’s the last sentence? Emma found a Tutsi who also went through the war?
Daniel: Yea, he was tortured for information. He got his heat beat in.
Johnny: That is what you call a Superman. He got hit by a machete and still survived.
David: Silhouette.
Johnny: How about torrential?
Daniel: Silhouette is like a shadow.
David: Rwanda.
Johnny: So how do we spell. S-i-l-o. What page?
Daniel. Page 67.
Johnny: What does it mean?
Daniel: It’s means like a shadow or a figure. No, wait it’s a person. You can’t really see any of features.
David: “I came around the bend in a cloud of brown dust with a hazy pink silhouette…
Daniel: So you can’t see them, but you can see their figure and maybe the color of their skin.
Johnny: So the shadow?
Daniel: Not shadow. It’s actually the person.
Johnny: I don’t get it. Why do they wear the pink?
Daniel: It said something about the prisoners that they wore a shade of pink.
Johnny: Who has another word? I have like two more, but I don’t understand them at all.