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Inspiration: We have shared this virtual space for 30 days — 30 days of words, phrases, images, and lines borrowed from lives lived and imagined.
Today, we’d like to encourage you to select a day from our 30 days on ethicalela.com and reread the poems looking for lines you can borrow/celebrate to make a new poem, a poem that honors and celebrates other poets who’ve shared their lives with us this past month. After your poem (or after each line) indicate the poets/poems you’ve borrowed as a thank you to the poets who inspired your verse.
Guidance:
- Pick a day and select lines form several poems to make something new — a found poem.
- Choose a poem you loved or found intriguing and try to answer someone else’s poem with a poem of your own.
- Choose a line you especially appreciated. You might pull out one of their lines to make your own.
- Add another stanza to someone else’s poem.
- Respond to someone’s poem with a new point of view. For example, I wrote a poem on Poem Twenty-Two from a tree’s point of view; you might write a similar poem from the person or equipment that was doing the deforestation.
Example of pulling lines from several poems to make something new, a found poem: For example, if you enjoyed the super powers day, go back to Poem Seven and find lines from a few poems to make your own. You can blend some of their lines with yours. A special thanks to Rieley, Jasmine, Louie, Kinga, and Ruby for your lines, which come together quite nicely here:
If I had a superpower, I’d
Steal anything I want, pull pranks, have fun (Rieley);
Chuck and move things with my mind, alter someone’s opinion (Jasmine);
Use instant transmission to teleport anywhere, around the world in one day (Louie);
Yes, finally! I’d be able to meet Nicholas Cage (Kinga);But maybe, sometimes, I’d
Let go of all the imaginary
and focus on finding the super hero (Ruby)within.
The best part of me
imagination
Like dancers
Hiding from the bright
Every moment of my life
sunlight
a person that’s there for you
not me
“What is there to add?” (Jeannie)
Even though I can say,
I did manage to extend my learning.
I never learn enough.
There is always so much more
to explore,
new languages to know,
new words to explore,
new places to find,
cultures and
more.
I’m glad
that I
was able to
nurture my brains in what
Dr.Donovan was able to show me.
I’ve learned so much in 7th grade.
I was able to use words that captivated so much meaning.
Flipping through pages of the book.
Music and characters just walking out from
the book.
Images zooming
through my brain.
Writing down my thoughts on paper and seeing
what happens.
Comparing text articles.
Hearing the tap, tap of our pencils.
Hearing the click, clack of us typing.
I’m glad I have
Dr.Donovan.
So thank you.
You made us grow from being
saplings to bring a sturdy tree that brings life.
We thrive with life,
bringing fruit that helps nurture others.
Wow! I love this poem! I love the part “new languages to know,
new words to explore,
new places to find,
cultures and
more.”
Because of the emotion put into it. If makes me feel happy!
My ultimate goal in life is to achieve all my goals,
join new clubs
But yet
I walk over there
And realize
Kind but had strong things
can be bad
The best part of me is my ability with words,
I love lemonade in colorful glasses,
Just as the purple light began to shine through the clouds the thunder shook the valley and the sky began to cry,
Around it, cement,
I learned from life that it’s going to hit you hard when you feel that it’s too easy and when you think that something can’t get any worse it gets better, so don’t just assume that things are going to be handed to you on a silver platter and that you have to fight back,
I felt like we had played really well and I couldn’t have done it without my coaches,
If I could acquire any superpower it would be flight,
I hope that you can forgive me,
Thank You.
Letter
Dear My Favorite Books,
You have made my life
Feel so special
With your encouraging
Words and kind characters.
When I flip through
Your pages and read
Your story, I can’t help
But love you.
So no matter what’s in you,
Love, or even hate,
You’ve made everything
About me better.
So thanks for speaking
The words of truth
I always wanted to,
But never knew how.
Supporting Others
You can lean on me when you’re not strong
When you need a shoulder to cry on
even if you feel worthless,
or you feel hopeless(Hayden W.)
but always remember this technique
Stand up tall
Don’t let people see you weak(Emma Nil)
But no one should be tough,
Not on others, or themselves.(Alyssa S)
I’m always here to talk to you(Izzy S)
So shed a tear if you want
because I will be there for you until dawn
But I’m still here
And I’ll never leave your side.(Jillian K)
So..
Rest those eyes that’ve read thousands of words
Rest the mouth that’s both wounded and loved so many hearts (Donovan)
i really like your poem a lot of teens could relate to this and it has a really strong message.
Jasmine,
I LOVED how you took bits and peices from other poems and put them in here. The way you figured out how to connect them is amazing! I especially like how you took “Don’t let people see you weak” from Emma and “But no one should be tough” from Alyssa. The contrast between the two lines really sent out a message and resonated within me– great job!!
Last day
Final poem
What should I talk about
I talked about…
Friends
Family
My interests
My fears
My accomplishments
My problems
Everything I feel comfortable with
What more is there to add?
Nothing
I talked about everything
And it’s time for me to say good bye
I was never great at poetry
But at least I got practice
I may of improved
That’s what counts
Hey Jeannie, I can relate to the line, “I talked about…Friends, Family, My interests, my fears, my accomplishments, my problems,” because I have also included all these subjects in my poems, which I am most comfortable sharing about, and I also believe that I have talked about everything, and have gotten practice and have improved over time.
It’s a bittersweet feeling,
to finally be done.
For all ends of the race,
seem like you just begun.
30 days of stretching our mind,
30 days of late night stanzas.
30 days of staying on track.
Even a kitten with a banana.
I didn’t really try on this last poem,
I can definitely say it’s not the bomb.
But I have to give just one small thanks.
Because I owe everything, to rhymezone.com.
Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed the line “For all ends of the race, seem like you just begun.” because even though this took 30 days, it feels much shorter and maybe when you say this line, you mean that it happened so fast and you want more.
Colin, I can totally relate to using rhymezone.com. My life of writing literally revolves around it?
30 poems in 30 days
30 works of art
30 comments
30 days of thinking
about 30 topics
30 day of thoughtfulness
stretching
“cause why not” and “IDK” (malik)
too
“I thought about” and “here I did”
30 days of thinking
Don’t worry about things that are not in your control (marissa)
like how people will conceive it
because every one of them holds something different (jillian)
30 days of pondering
This is a a beautiful form of art (Uma)
that is well written and great
they say
Last day
oping for this to come
strain our brains to think of one more
to get one more done
well this the last one at lost for words
came to this website every day for 30 days
can’t believe this is my last poem
it was fun
it was tough
it was enough
to get you through the year and stay clear
from getting board
so lets celebrate
since this is great
Hey Gabrielle, I can relate to the line, “Can’t believe this is my last poem”, because after 30 days of writing a poem everyday, I have grown used to coming on ethicalela.com, and clicking on today’s date, and reading the prompt, and writing a poem, and now it’s the last time, to express my emotions toward a subject.
we had 30 days
for 30 poems
30 comments
30 ways to think
and express ourselves
in our work
30 for 30.
It was difficult at times.
And some poems were crazy.
But people poem for a lifetime.
Just try,
Someone said for my.
And I did.
But now I say goodbye.
So thank you for joining me on this journey.
I hope we’ll see each other again in this poem symphony.
(That was cringy)
Keep going,
Don’t stop,(Emma B)
it’ll work out,(Emma Nil)
What if,
it won’t turn out,
like last time?, (Rieley),
Just try,
you might just be able to find out,
That you’re good at something,
You never thought you could be,(Aliyah)
It’s all up to you,(Maddie)
Try to make a difference,
To show that,
You learn from your mistakes,(Karen A)
Life is a fancy maneuver,
That I no longer resist,
But persist(Dr. Donovan)
Learning so much
in a short amount if time.
Wonder if everything I learn
is correct.
Or, if I’m just hearing
the wrong answers.
I’ll figure it out one day.
For now I’ll just
Learn.
I can relate to the part “Wonder if everything I learn is correct” because sometimes I learn stuff and i wonder if they are actually true.
Another year coming to a close
I can’t believe how we’ve grown.
I’ve gained knowledge.
I’ve gained friends.
It’s crazy to think of where I’ve been.
It feels to many like this is the end
but I think many new things will come and transcend
I don’t want to say goodbye
because thinking of memories will make me cry.
so for now lets leave with a “see you soon”
I hope to see you more then a blue moon.
When you wrote “I can’t believe how we’ve grown” I felt like I can relate to that because I also feel like I have grown not only physical but also mentally
30 days,
for 30 poems.
My last one.
I can’t decide whether I’m happy
or sad.
I knew on day 1 this would take a lot of effort,
I was right.
But I’m glad I got to look at other’s poems,
and compare them to what’s going on in my head.
I’m glad I could explore what I could write.
To read other’s comments about what I write.
For 30 days,
and 30 poems.
Music
The one to get me away from pain.
The one to heal my heart. (Camila)
It can provide you with adrenaline,
it can calm you down and mellow you. (William)
Music takes me somewhere I wish I could be for my whole life. (Ruby)
Your words “The one to get me away from pain” really moved me because I know a lot of people including myself who listen to music and use as a way to forget their problems.
It wasn’t my choice (McKinley)
The feeling of abandonment (Aliyah)
For a year no mom at night
I feel confused (Izzy)
Yet I know there’s always someone there
I learned I’m not alone (Jarely)
Chessie- I really thought it was cool how you took lines from different poems and made it flow so nicely. I like the part when you added “I’ve learned I’m not alone” it was a great closing to the overall poem.
A letter
Dear person I used to know,
I’m sorry that I can’t be without you (Aliyah)
I tried to live without you and it didn’t work out
Now I’m hurting and you don’t care
Because you stayed when he didn’t (Ayanna)
People always told me
There is always someone, there is a shoulder to cry on (Tomas)
I always hoped you were that person
I wonder what came of you (Kaitlyn)
I didn’t think it was a big deal(Nico)
I wanna thank you for making me feel like I was never wanted (Christina)
I will always be waiting (Brenda)
Sorry you gave up on me (Anonymous)
I thought I knew you
I guess I was wrong
Sadly
i like how you took a lot of lines and made it fit together really well, as if it were one big poem.
Flaws and strenghts(many)
The thing about flaws(many)
Is we can never escape them(elicia
It doesnt matter
You are much stronger know(leslie)
I’m really happy that (kinga)
You are doing better.
I know you’ve been through a lot (Jarely)
The light that she illuminates
makes the rest of the cold world
warm again. (Marrisa)
You are much stronger now
Something that I would like people to think about me is that I was a
Hard working
Student and classmate (Jillian)
I want to be remembered as someone that made a difference
I don’t care about how much money I would have, or how big of a house I could have because changing someone’s life can be a greater moment than
winning the lottery, or getting your dream home (Hayden)
I’ve always been told what I cannot do,
But also what I can do
And I believe I can do this.
What is making a difference?
It can be anything. (Abigail)
I took life for granted(leilany)
To make a difference(Mckinley)
Magazines tell us we need to be more “pretty” (Emma)
They say,
Too fat
Too skinny
Too tall (Ashanti)
Society has taught us to pick on our body (Melany)
What if I told you that I always feel like nobody? (Dylan)
When I go to sleep each night,
I still can hear the screaming,
the crying,
the breaking glass (Anonymous)
Being left behind (Jessica)
I let it take over (Jarely)
Humans, just like flowers (Rebecca)
Clumsy,
Shy,
Lazy (Leilany)
FLAWED (Leo)
I like how you have a bunch of people incorporated into your poem
I took life for granted (Leilany)
No one can have your identity (Sonja)
Even when you dont want to be you
Ive learned to have confidence (Izzy)
Well, to succeed (Maddie)
You must be
Showing me new strategies (Ms.Arl)
To accept me for me
30 poems
I never liked poems
until now
Within a month
of liking poems
I won an award.
How do I want to be remembered?
Do I want to be the party animal?
Do I want to be the evil one?
Flaws and strengths
Strengths and flaws(Lizzie)
The thing about flaws
is we can never escape them.( Elicia)
Strengths are just something you need to work with most of the time
My biggest flaw and my biggest strength are the same thing( Aliyah)
Being me
You helped me
I was never like this
I don’t know
It just happened
Life is full of challenges
You helped me
30 days
30 poems
People from all around
One website
Hundereds of stories
Hidden within
Many things have happened
In these past 30 days
All I can say is it’s a good time for a new beginning
The year is coming to an end
Kids starting to get anxious
Teachers starting to get stressed
Trying to cram everything in
When all kids want to do is leave
Soon 8th graders will graduate
Some will leave the school they grew up in
Some will just be leaving another school
People getting ready for high school
Bracing themselves of whats next to come
Getting ready to take on a new challenge
A new chapter
A new beginning
Spending so many years together as students
Its sad isn’t it?
Eventually we will all have to leave
Go our separate ways
Say goodbye to our classmates
Not for a week
Not for a couple months
Forever
As much as i’d like to say goodbye to start my own life
Something keeps pulling me back
Friends
Winston is like my second home
Soon all the members of our family will
Disperse
Going to college
And then
School becomes a distant memory
A picture
A story to tell our kids when we are old
And we’ll look back on this day and think
¨where did the time go?¨
I really liked your poem. It made me have so many emotions and what you are saying is true. Soon this will all just be old memories and we will all have parted out own ways. I don’t want that to happen but time forces that on us and no matter if we like it our not…… time keeps going.
Normal characters are unlikable.
A sponge who “loves krabby patties, always wanted to be manager, loved his job”(-Khari)
A star who “lives under a rock, ‘Is mayonaise an instrument'”(-Brenda)
Compare those to
People who are ordinary
That’s why I’m quirky
Flaws and Strengths;
“I act before I think,
I talk too much, but not enough,
Crowds make me freak out,”
Everyone might have that one doubt,
But no one should be tough,
Not on others, or themselves.
“Imperfections make us who we are,
Everyone has their different flaws,”
There are always friends in need that aren’t too far,
Friends, Family, Parents, Adults,
Are there for you, especially when it’s an important cause.
“Nobody is perfect.”
The end is good and bad,
When it is the finish line,
You want to finish,
In time,
But when it’s the end,
Of time,
Then you realize,
Just how much it is a crime,
Mixed feelings,
Are all I feel,
Joyful and proud of my work,
And sad to see it all role away like a wheel.
The End
Is it really the end?
or is it just the beginning?
Is there really ever “the end” of something?
or is “the end” just where we all started from?
The end can be sad,
happy, relief,
The end can make us forget our worries,
make us stronger, ruin things.
So, what is the end?
When you said “is it really the end? Or is it just the beginning” Made me think as a reader where you were going with the story. Good job making it suspencful
Wuzzz GOOD WITH YOU BECCA???
I wonder if one day
when we help the earth
if all the problems in this world will dissipate
and if all the good will reanimate
I noticed and liked how yow you rhymed the last two lines. your poem also bringes up a good point that helping the world may help to get rid of our own problems like global warming (no it’s not a hoax) and pollution.
Imagine
Where windows are replaced with walls, as the green views have faded into gray,
instead of that we can,
give back,
When we help the earth.
It’s Earth so
Don’t let it go to waste
There’s only one,
take care of the planet we have
before it’s gone.
I like how you said, “Where windows are replaced with walls, as the green views have faded into gray,” It really helped you imagine what the world would be like without personality.
Poem 20
This world is not perfect (me)
To make a difference (mckinley)
Takes courage
If we wanted to change humans behavior (ricardo)
It would be impossible
Imagine if we did solve this problem, though (mik)
I wonder if one day,(emma)
I’ll find out.
I like how there is all the different lines from the same topic to make a poem for Earth Day
It’s cool how almost all of your poem is quotes taken from other students. You took a bunch of inspiring words from other poets and fitted them all together like a puzzle piece, to make even more inspiring words. My favorite part was at the end “I wonder if one day, I’ll find out.” How do you think we can change humans behavior?
Way back when I was small #2
Way back when I was small, (Me)
My parents taught me how to walk. (Jackson)
I learned to treat everyone the same. (Edgar)
I learned that I should try different paths in my life. (Lisette)
I learned that society makes things correct/incorrect. (Ricardo)
I learned from my friends that they will always be there to protect me. (Jarely)
I learned to forgive people. (Miriam)
I learned from life is that life is unfair (Alex)
And you will have a wonderful life. (Me)
I think the different quotes you used fit well together.
I really like the begining how it say’s “way back when I was small, my parents taught me how to walk,” I found that funny how that perfectly fit.
I like how the first and last line are by you and all the other lines are by other people
When you quoted “I learned that I should try different paths in my life,” I thought that it was helpful advice because we should try new things.
I enjoyed reading your poem and how every line came together nicely. The line that I liked was where you said,” I learned from my friends that they will always be there to protect me.” Most of us feel that we won’t get protected by others so we try to protect ourselves and it doesn’t always work. We have to trust other to be there for us.
I am sitting in my big, comfy chair with my coffee
as I have at this time for the last 30 days, and
I am thinking about all the different ways
we have poem-ed together.
I hear you. I feel you. I thank you.
There are other hearts out there
who may have poem-ed less
followed from the fringe
but who have, nonetheless, heard us express
and feel blessed
to have read your verse and the rest.
Thank you.
I am just so thankful to you all
for sharing this virtual – no actual- space,
for being vulnerable, honorable, adorable, and invincible,
for your beautiful words on the page,
some we just could not say in our days,
and for witnessing lives lived in this way.
I love that we are all equals in this space —
not the same (thank goodness),
but here — there is no shame -ing or blame-ing.
There are no grades made,
no cutting blades of apprais-al.
There are no requirements or performance.
This has been a place to express, collect, reflect, and even experiment.
If you are new to verse, you have likely discovered,
uncovered poetry’s gift of therapy —
its power to assuage souls, stir inspiration, and bring joy.
When you share your poem with us,
it goes from yours to ours, and,
well, thank you.
Wonderful contributions to National Poetry Month. Thank you!